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Haiku Train



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Sun Jun 06, 2021 9:35 pm
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yosh says...



they refuse to sink,
those memories of autumn,
floating, but not gone
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Tue Jun 08, 2021 12:41 am
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fatherfig says...



they refuse to sink
my mud annoyances climb
the walls my being built

_______
floating but not gone
tattered leaves bob on water
like threadbare patience
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sun Jun 13, 2021 6:21 am
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Liminality says...



Like threadbare patience,
the leaves on the lake, floating
amid thick white clouds.
she/her

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Sun Jun 13, 2021 9:33 pm
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yosh says...



amid thick white clouds
traces of winter emerge
hanging on to snow
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:33 pm
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alliyah says...



ear pressed on to snow
i hear summer thawing through
just beneath the ice
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:34 pm
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momonster says...



just beneath the ice
there is a sliver of hope
it's out of my reach
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Tue Jun 15, 2021 8:51 pm
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creaturefeature says...



it's out of my reach,
a soul left in the snowdrift,
a frostnip solstice.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Sat Jun 19, 2021 12:13 am
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Liminality says...



a frostnip solstice --
ice crystals tremble on glass,
hanging from windows
she/her

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Sat Jun 19, 2021 3:42 am
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sakeofvanity05 says...



hanging from windows
dew drips its misty shadow
ink pools at my feet
"It was a great mistake, my being born man;
I would have been much more successful as a seagull or a fish.

~ Eugene O'Neill, Long Day's Journey Into Night
  





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Sat Jun 19, 2021 7:53 am
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illy7896 says...



ink pools at my feet,
Staining lava, thats eating
the ground beneath me.
  





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Sat Jun 19, 2021 11:25 am
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fatherfig says...



the ground beneath me
trembles i am but a mouse
shaken by giants
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Tue Jun 22, 2021 2:33 pm
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Liminality says...



shaken by giants,
ocean waves slosh and scatter
the foam-white seagulls
she/her

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Thu Sep 16, 2021 4:03 am
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alliyah says...



the foam-white seagulls
borrow the clouds for the day
in exchange for wings
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Nov 05, 2021 10:26 am
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Liminality says...



in exchange for wings
mother ants suffer largeness --
targets for slippers
she/her

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Thu Jan 20, 2022 8:12 pm
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Hijinks says...



target for slippers:
that two hour long physics
class presentation.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  








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— Mark Twain