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Haiku Train

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Wed May 25, 2022 11:21 am

Kelisot says...

Water to blood clots
Bursting a sanguine river
Water that ran dry

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed May 25, 2022 11:44 am

NewHope says...

Water that ran dry
Like a fox out of a river
Glittered on the plants

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Wed May 25, 2022 12:07 pm

Kelisot says...

Glittered on the plants
Are the white fallen sinew-snow
Ashes of the slain

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Wed May 25, 2022 1:16 pm

NewHope says...

(Interesting metaphor!)

ashes of the slain
locked up and thrown away in
to old school lockers

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Wed May 25, 2022 1:46 pm

clarevelyn13 says...

two old school lockers
side by side and down the hall
makes for two best friends

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Wed May 25, 2022 2:07 pm

Kelisot says...

makes for two best friends
with magical fairydust
today is the best

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Wed May 25, 2022 3:44 pm

NewHope says...

"Today is my best,"
says the flood of written words
as it chases love.

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Wed May 25, 2022 4:02 pm

Kelisot says...

as it chases love
god commands death to our love
we are in danger

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Wed May 25, 2022 4:31 pm

NewHope says...

We are in danger
Like kids chased by packs of cards
As if gambling calls

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Wed May 25, 2022 5:28 pm

Valkyria says...

As if gambling calls
I give a sinful smile.
Open the first hand

There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude

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Thu May 26, 2022 2:18 am

Kelisot says...

Open the first hand
A red king and a black ace
It is a blackjack

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Thu May 26, 2022 3:35 am

NewHope says...

It is a black jack,
Jack knife to the stomach, oh,
Those hard heavy blues

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Thu May 26, 2022 3:46 am

clarevelyn13 says...

Those hard heavy blues
Crash into me as ocean waves.
Cut right to the core.

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Thu May 26, 2022 3:48 am

Liminality says...

Cut right to the core,
plump crow, with the strong black beak
on shiny apples.

she/her

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Thu May 26, 2022 3:57 am

NewHope says...

Of shiny apples
That have slid across my hand
And fell to grass dew

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