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Haiku Train



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Sun Mar 27, 2022 11:33 pm
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creaturefeature says...



and mix with sunbeams,
one day, light and dark will have
reached stability.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Mon Mar 28, 2022 11:05 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Reached stability
Or perhaps I think I did
Can one ever tell?
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2022 12:18 am
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alliyah says...



can one ever tell
when a new season appears
we can only guess.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon Apr 25, 2022 12:39 am
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Haraya says...



We can only guess
How a river changes course
When storms scrape its banks
  





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Sun May 01, 2022 9:44 pm
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alliyah says...



when storms scrape earth banks
the sand turns in soft protest
centuries washed away

Spoiler! :

I am hoping centuries is two syllables, but maybe I pronounce it wrong? ope
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun May 01, 2022 10:29 pm
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creaturefeature says...



centuries washed away;
these old photos can hold more
dreams, wishful thinking.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Mon May 02, 2022 4:57 am
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NewHope says...



Spoiler! :
Isn't it cen-tu-ries?


Dreams, wishful thinking
Staring up at the starlight
Imagining dreams
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
  





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Mon May 02, 2022 9:26 am
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Buranko says...



Imagining dreams;
Resonating fingers on
The table of grass.
  





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Mon May 02, 2022 12:43 pm
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fatherfig says...




the table of grass
shifts in the wind my coffee
steaming between waves
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Mon May 02, 2022 8:49 pm
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Plume says...



steaming between waves,
beachside ironing lessons.
the mist's free of charge.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Tue May 03, 2022 7:28 am
Liminality says...



The mist's free of charge,
morning dew speckles the grass
all along the path.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Tue May 03, 2022 11:24 am
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NewHope says...



All along the path
Birds twitter and fly across
Their songs like Spring's waters
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Tue May 03, 2022 3:23 pm
EsmerayaRose says...



Their songs like spring's waters
Silent hush resigned to fate
Ending through seasons
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

she/they
  





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Wed May 04, 2022 8:37 pm
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NewHope says...



Ending thorough seasons
I settle down, watching
Fairy lights glowing
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Fri May 06, 2022 12:25 pm
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Liminality says...



Fairy lights glowing,
lighting the tips of love-grass
below the window.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  








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