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Haiku Train



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Thu Feb 03, 2022 3:30 pm
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Plume says...



wake of our demise
is coming soon, but for now
say we're eternal
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Feb 03, 2022 3:38 pm
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Hijinks says...



say we're eternal
and then twirl me around like
a snowy whirlpool
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Feb 03, 2022 5:41 pm
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Starve says...



a snowy whirlpool
was melted by angry eyes.
must it end like this?
  





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Thu Feb 03, 2022 6:13 pm
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fatherfig says...



musty ends and bliss
the towers have turned to trees
metals dust and breeze
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri Feb 04, 2022 1:08 pm
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Hkumar says...



metals dust and breeze
rust hides the inner beauty
life consumed in time
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 7:49 pm
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Starve says...



life consumed in time
enables heathens to live
when they should be gone
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 8:12 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



When they should be gone
They lie in wait in shadows
Just biding their time.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 8:17 pm
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fatherfig says...



when they should be gone
flowers remerge into
sunlight unfettered


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just biding their time
until growth when they will woo
incomparable
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 8:27 pm
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alliyah says...



incomparable
summer heat to winter wind
seasonal distance
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 8:33 pm
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creaturefeature says...



seasonal distance;
i am preparing for my
winter migration
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 8:59 pm
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SilverNight says...



winter migration
wears out the wings and wishes
of wandering birds
"silv is obsessed with heists" ~Omni

"silv why didn't you tell me you were obsessed with heists I thought we were friends" ~Ace

"y’all we outnumber silver let’s overthrow her >:]" ~winter

silver (she/they)
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 9:04 pm
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alliyah says...



of wandering birds
i like to dream, my feathers
tied to their swift wings
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2022 9:53 pm
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Plume says...



tied to their swift wings
are seeds, spreading as they fly.
the new-life givers.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Mon Feb 07, 2022 10:33 am
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Liminality says...



the new-life givers,
landlubbers, ahoy! sea brings
scurvy buccaneers
she/her

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Tue Feb 08, 2022 5:40 am
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alliyah says...



scurvy buccaneers
sometimes still sigh at sunrise
beauty of the sea
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  








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