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Haiku Train



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Sat Jan 29, 2022 8:48 pm
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starlitmind says...



you’re lines on a screen
and I keep pretending I
don’t know how to read
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Sat Jan 29, 2022 9:02 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Don't know how to read
My name's Jared; I'm nineteen
No one taught me how

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I am so sorry, but not sorry at all.
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 9:21 pm
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alliyah says...



no one taught me how
to hold daylight in my hands
trust tomorrow comes
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 9:25 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Trust tomorrow comes
Even if you know it won't
And death is next door
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 9:29 pm
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alliyah says...



if Death lives next door
let's leave the doors locked today
let Fate wait knocking

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Ahhhh ~ let's maybe try to turn spin these into a more positive direction? D: can it be done?
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 9:32 pm
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WeepingWisteria says...



Let fate wait knocking
For fate just bends to your will
The power is yours

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Sorry! Is this better? I tend to get carried away... :(
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Sat Jan 29, 2022 10:33 pm
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fatherfig says...



the power is yours
to plant a sunflower in
someone's heart, next morn'
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Sun Jan 30, 2022 7:19 pm
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Plume says...



someone's heart, next morn'
will beat for you, relentless,
this I know is true.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Sun Jan 30, 2022 8:51 pm
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starlitmind says...



this I know is true:
potatoes are wonderful
broccoli is too
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Mon Jan 31, 2022 3:45 am
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Liminality says...



Broccoli is too
large for the meadow grasses --
the blades turn yellow.
she/her

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WeepingWisteria says...



The blades turn yellow
In the angry summer sun
Everything decays
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2022 5:50 am
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Starve says...



every thing decays.
good ⎯ unchanged eternities
sound horrifying
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2022 6:08 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Sounds horrifying
To stay forever stagnant
When everything shifts
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2022 6:15 pm
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alliyah says...



when everything shifts
know the spruce roots still stand still
and they don't forget

Spoiler! :
Anyone up for a Haiku Train Challenge? Let's see if we can go the whole month of February with at least one person posting a new haiku every day!
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2022 6:28 pm
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fatherfig says...



and i can't forget
how you smiled when i last saw
your rays, life giver
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  








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