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Haiku Train



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Tue Mar 30, 2021 2:07 pm
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Valkyria says...



they give oxygen
to the poor souls who cannot
swim underwater
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 3:37 am
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Liminality says...



Swim underwater,
where the grasses dance swaying,
cool and emerald.
she/her

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Wed Mar 31, 2021 3:41 am
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Shady says...



cool and emerald,
the glint of a fish's scales
in shimmering sun

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 5:29 pm
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yosh says...



in shimmering sun
snowflakes shine brighter than all
but melt so quickly
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 5:39 pm
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illy7896 says...



Melting so quickly
Our loves ribboned facade
I untie the knot
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 9:12 pm
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Shady says...



i untie the knot
and pour our "love" on the ground;
a youthful mistake

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
[they/he]
  





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Wed Mar 31, 2021 10:02 pm
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Hijinks says...



youthful mistakes: don't
make unempty promises
if they can't be filled.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Apr 01, 2021 8:52 am
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illy7896 says...



If they can't be filled
Empty cups sit in the sun
Rolling in the mud
  





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Thu Apr 29, 2021 1:53 am
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Liminality says...



Rolling in the mud
tiny broken skipping stones,
tossed by a tail-swipe.
she/her

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Thu Apr 29, 2021 1:59 am
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fatherfig says...



tossed by tales of spite,
carbon dyoxide enters
greedy trees domain
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Apr 29, 2021 2:19 am
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blueca says...



a greedy tree and
its greedy inhabitants
only know profit
  





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Mon May 03, 2021 11:10 pm
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Buranko says...



"Only know profit"
The father bear told his son
Slurping fresh honey
  





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Mon May 03, 2021 11:31 pm
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fatherfig says...



slurping fresh honey
is exactly how water
should feel when its drank
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu May 06, 2021 6:39 am
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Liminality says...



should feel when its drank
the dew on a lily pad
same as pond water
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Sun Jun 06, 2021 5:17 pm
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Hijinks says...



like pond water, my
heart carries water striders:
they refuse to sink.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  








i, too, use desk chairs for harm and harm alone
— Omni