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Haiku Train

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Sun May 22, 2022 8:53 pm

Starve says...

falls forward and spills
all of dusk's fading grief in-
to a sea awe-ringed.

Spoiler! :

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Mon May 23, 2022 3:10 am

Kelisot says...

to a sea awe-ringed
i hold your fleece-covered hand
touch and love my body

Spoiler! :

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Points: 155
Reviews: 30

Mon May 23, 2022 3:22 am

NewHope says...

(Hm... now I have to use that last line as well... hm...)

Touch and love my body;
Our breath shivers like starlight's
Glittering fires

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Mon May 23, 2022 7:25 am

Liminality says...

Glittering fires,
a cold night in the valley
by the rushing stream.

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Mon May 23, 2022 8:41 am

NewHope says...

By the rushing stream
Swallows yawn and loudly sigh
Like old stars resting

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Mon May 23, 2022 11:22 am

Kelisot says...

Like old stars resting
Then bursting with a great BOOM
A supernova

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Mon May 23, 2022 12:53 pm

NewHope says...

a supernova
shatters into a million
shards of starry skies

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Mon May 23, 2022 2:12 pm

Starve says...

shards of starry skies
shards to scarry ties of wood
please don't kill the tree!

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Mon May 23, 2022 3:10 pm

NewHope says...

Please don't kill the tree
Not many are left, please don't;
Remember the birds

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Mon May 23, 2022 5:34 pm

Kelisot says...

Remember the birds
Who soars with majestic wings
The guard of the sky

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Mon May 23, 2022 5:38 pm

NewHope says...

The guard of the sky
Lifts whispers and shields and spears
To battle storm clouds

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Mon May 23, 2022 6:52 pm

Kelisot says...

To battle storm clouds
Bring a sunny sword and shield
And fight through your way!

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Mon May 23, 2022 7:23 pm

Valkyria says...

And fight through your way;
the broken memories of
the past burden you

There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude

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Mon May 23, 2022 8:47 pm

alliyah says...

the past burdens you.
i see when your shoulders hunch
again; you're weighed down

you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now

but i have promised to return

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Mon May 23, 2022 11:21 pm

Kelisot says...

again you're weighed down
the scale of justice has answered
you are a sinner

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway.
— Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)