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Haiku Train

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Points: 400
Reviews: 66

Fri May 06, 2022 1:43 pm

Starve says...

Below the window
lies a dove that mistook it
for gloomy dusk skies.

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Points: 155
Reviews: 30

Fri May 06, 2022 7:31 pm

NewHope says...

For gloomy dusk skies
Lie flat on the horizon
In the cold of night

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Points: 18
Reviews: 78

Wed May 11, 2022 6:50 am

Buranko says...

In the cold of the night
My mind wanders seamlessly;
The dead of the day.

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Points: 155
Reviews: 30

Wed May 11, 2022 7:20 am

NewHope says...

The dead of the day
Looms over my cold shoulders
Like snowflakes drifting

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Reviews: 66

Wed May 11, 2022 10:16 pm

Starve says...

like snowflakes drifting
like frost melting with the sun
like your secret smile.

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Points: 371
Reviews: 35

Thu May 12, 2022 3:05 am

Kelisot says...

secrets lie beneath
the earth rumbles majesty
we discover them

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Points: 41664
Reviews: 542

Thu May 12, 2022 4:18 am

Liminality says...

We discover them
the clouds behind grey tree tops
lit by the pale sun.

she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?

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Points: 12
Reviews: 42

Thu May 12, 2022 12:20 pm

EsmerayaRose says...

Lit by the pale sun
Lonely heart answers to none
Betraying flowers

I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~
she/they

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Points: 155
Reviews: 30

Thu May 12, 2022 5:48 pm

NewHope says...

Betraying flowers
Hold me close and slash my chest
As I kiss petals

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Points: 371
Reviews: 35

Thu May 12, 2022 9:38 pm

Kelisot says...

The train starts running
Choo-Choo I hear the engine
An adventure awaits

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Reviews: 542

Fri May 13, 2022 1:40 am

Liminality says...

An adventure awaits
the white butterfly, at dawn --
flight until mid-day.

she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?

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Points: 155
Reviews: 30

Fri May 13, 2022 10:23 am

NewHope says...

@Kelisot You should end with the last line of the person before you. So for example my haiku will start with start the last line of the haiku of Lim’s haiku.

Flight until mid-day
Hares scatter around headlights
But so still at night

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Points: 371
Reviews: 35

Fri May 13, 2022 11:25 am

Kelisot says...

Sorry! I didn't know

But so still at night
The silence was so fragile
The wolves' howls broke it

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans

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Points: 155
Reviews: 30

Fri May 13, 2022 7:00 pm

NewHope says...

Don’t worry. I just hope you’re enjoying taking part!

The wolves’ howl broke it
Like a tingling crawling down
Down, down, down your spine

Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022

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Points: 400
Reviews: 66

Fri May 13, 2022 9:26 pm

Starve says...

down, down, down your spine
the first showers of rain bring
a slowing, a calm.

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In the winter months, snowstorms and rainfall in the Patagonian Ice Fields can drastically affect the landscape. Worsened by heavy winds, such storms can reduce visibility and lead to glacial calving, ice collapses, and avalanches. During these conditions, travel is not advised.
— The Documentarian