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Haiku Train



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Sat May 09, 2020 4:09 pm
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alliyah says...



Can someone fix this?
these cracks in the night sky where
light keeps breaking in.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Mon May 11, 2020 4:17 pm
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kattee says...



Marigold light sneaks
Through argent blinds and towards
an empty bedroom.
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

Have a lovely day❤️
  





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Mon May 11, 2020 5:32 pm
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KahleneTenorio says...



An empty bedroom,
Once filled with pulsing life,
Gone With nothing left.
If I could have anything I could ever want... It would be having Spotify Premium ;-;
  





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Tue May 12, 2020 7:34 am
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mythh says...



With nothing left, I've
Got not much to lose except
For my very life.
The name's Myth.
  





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Tue May 12, 2020 9:57 pm
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Hijinks says...



My very life has
become a repetitive
tangle of minutes.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Wed May 13, 2020 12:30 am
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KahleneTenorio says...



Tangle of minutes
No escaping time itself
Trapped in a time loop
If I could have anything I could ever want... It would be having Spotify Premium ;-;
  





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Wed May 13, 2020 12:59 am
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alliyah says...



trapped in a time loop
we trade minutes for wishes
and hope we're on time.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Reviews: 127
Wed May 13, 2020 4:40 am
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mythh says...



Hoping we're on time
I cherish those moments ere
They are lost to deceit.
The name's Myth.
  





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Wed May 13, 2020 5:22 am
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Que says...



We’re lost to deceit—
but see, my darling, how well
these lies become us.
Parlez-vous français?
  





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Wed May 13, 2020 11:50 am
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chiefhoco says...



Those truths are ourselves
Yet we are blind always near you
The wonder of love.
  





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Sat May 16, 2020 1:45 pm
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Hijinks says...



I wonder about
love - is it a sick shadow
cast by my desire?
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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127 Reviews



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Reviews: 127
Sat May 16, 2020 2:05 pm
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mythh says...



or is my desire
a cast to be cast to see
past the real shade?
The name's Myth.
  





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Thu May 21, 2020 3:32 pm
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alliyah says...



the tree lends her shade,
lets you lean against her back
and asks for nothing.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu May 21, 2020 4:07 pm
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KahleneTenorio says...



and asks for nothing
waiting for you listen
to her sad whispers
If I could have anything I could ever want... It would be having Spotify Premium ;-;
  





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Fri May 22, 2020 3:54 am
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kattee says...



Sad whispers echo
Throughout a busy street in
A sinking suburb.
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelogue.

Have a lovely day❤️
  








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— The Bee Movie