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Haiku Train

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Thu Jun 09, 2022 10:11 pm

Kelisot says...

Down a dark night sky
The small moon shimmers dimly
Rabbits dash all over

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 4:37 am

NewHope says...

Rabbits dash all over
From burrow to sandy burrow
Like shining luck’s hope

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:01 pm

Kelisot says...

Like shining luck's hope
All twenty-six pairs finished
I have won your game

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:09 pm

NewHope says...

I have won your game
Of pointless, lost tug of war
Over our snapped twine

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:26 pm

Kelisot says...

Over our snapped twine
The thin red strings of fate broke
And we have realized

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:27 pm

Liminality says...

And we have realised
the swan-flight over the lake
great loud beating wings

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:36 pm

Kelisot says...

Great loud beating wings
The griffin has descended
Roaring with power

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 2:12 pm

NewHope says...

Roaring with power
Sunlight scatters on a plain
Burning a red hue

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 3:17 pm

Kelisot says...

Burning a red hue
The disappearance of blood
Is revolution

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Fri Jun 10, 2022 5:19 pm

NewHope says...

Is revolution
A period of grey stars
Scattered through the sky

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Sun Jun 12, 2022 2:35 pm

Kelisot says...

Scattered through the sky
Forgotten constellations
Stories forgotten

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Sun Jun 12, 2022 2:54 pm

NewHope says...

Stories forgotten
To old, brown forest leaves blown
Through stormy gullies

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Sun Jun 12, 2022 5:12 pm

Kelisot says...

Through stormy gullies
My hollowness is bigger
A mind of glass breaks

Last edited by Kelisot on Sun Jun 12, 2022 9:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Sun Jun 12, 2022 5:14 pm

NewHope says...

(@Kelisot... your addition of my makes your first line six syllables and not five.)

A mind of glass breaks
When thrown to the dusty floor
Like an antique vase

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Sun Jun 12, 2022 9:05 pm

Kelisot says...

(Oops... my bad)

Like an antique vase
Such a fragile life to mourn
My dearest loved ones

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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