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Haiku Train



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Mon Jun 13, 2022 1:44 pm
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NewHope says...



My dearest loved ones
Taken away in a storm
Of unfitting rage - gunshot

(Maybe a bit harsh and too soon - but this is based on American Gun Control.)
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
  





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Mon Jun 13, 2022 4:08 pm
Kelisot says...



Of unfitting rage, gunshots
Hide or hide, there is no fight
Stay quiet or die
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Tue Jun 14, 2022 2:11 am
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alliyah says...



"stay alive or die"
the ocean mocks the moon-sky
as night turns, day wakes
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Tue Jun 14, 2022 2:29 am
Kelisot says...



Spoiler! :
(It was "stay quiet or die" but eh, I really don't care.)


As night turns, day awakes
Celestial angels run away
Into the deep darkness
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Wed Jun 15, 2022 3:09 pm
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NewHope says...



Into the deep darkness
Of moonlight on my cold face
Struck by an old star
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Wed Jun 15, 2022 3:49 pm
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Kelisot says...



Struck by an old star
Pearls burst in the dark night skies
Gems shimmer across
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed Jun 15, 2022 4:40 pm
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NewHope says...



Gems shimmer across
The coffin’s clear crystal top,
“Why is your face pale?”
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Wed Jun 15, 2022 10:46 pm
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Kelisot says...



Why is your face pale,
Have you seen the souls of Death?
Shall I comfort you?
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Thu Jun 16, 2022 1:51 am
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Plume says...



Shall I comfort you?
I can curl up in your lap
and softly meow.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Jun 16, 2022 2:00 am
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Kelisot says...



And softly meow
You love my tabby-tabby
Petting me softly
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Thu Jun 16, 2022 2:11 am
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Hijinks says...



Letting me softly
disappear into the noise
and just nod along
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Jun 16, 2022 3:22 am
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NewHope says...



And just nod along
Like a waveline shore pounded
By dull storm water
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Thu Jun 16, 2022 4:08 pm
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Kelisot says...



By dull storm water
The sun never shines again
My darkest days start
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Thu Jun 16, 2022 4:49 pm
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NewHope says...



My darkest days start
At sunrays upon morning
Mist - as it flies - breathe
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Fri Jun 17, 2022 3:01 am
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Kelisot says...



Mist, as it flies, breathes
New life hovering above
The wind gives new life
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  








Obsessing over what you regret won't get you anywhere.
— Steggy