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Haiku Train
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Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Thu Jun 09, 2022 10:11 pm
Kelisot
says...
Down a dark night sky
The small moon shimmers dimly
Rabbits dash all over
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
Gender:
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Fri Jun 10, 2022 4:37 am
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Kelisot
NewHope
says...
Rabbits dash all over
From burrow to sandy burrow
Like shining luck’s hope
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:01 pm
Kelisot
says...
Like shining luck's hope
All twenty-six pairs finished
I have won your game
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
Gender:
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:09 pm
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Kelisot
NewHope
says...
I have won your game
Of pointless, lost tug of war
Over our snapped twine
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:26 pm
Kelisot
says...
Over our snapped twine
The thin red strings of fate broke
And we have realized
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
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Points: 41664
Reviews: 542
Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:27 pm
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Kelisot
,
NewHope
,
Hijinks
Liminality
says...
And we have realised
the swan-flight over the lake
great loud beating wings
Spoiler!
:
Wrote this one earlier:
Over our snapped twine
the ants scramble in zig-zags
their bodies shiny.
she/her
.
Have you met my friend,
The Story Review Template
?
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Fri Jun 10, 2022 12:36 pm
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Hijinks
Kelisot
says...
Great loud beating wings
The griffin has descended
Roaring with power
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
Gender:
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Fri Jun 10, 2022 2:12 pm
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Hijinks
,
Kelisot
NewHope
says...
Roaring with power
Sunlight scatters on a plain
Burning a red hue
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Fri Jun 10, 2022 3:17 pm
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Hijinks
Kelisot
says...
Burning a red hue
The disappearance of blood
Is revolution
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
Gender:
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Fri Jun 10, 2022 5:19 pm
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Kelisot
,
Hijinks
NewHope
says...
Is revolution
A period of grey stars
Scattered through the sky
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sun Jun 12, 2022 2:35 pm
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Hijinks
Kelisot
says...
Scattered through the sky
Forgotten constellations
Stories forgotten
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
Gender:
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sun Jun 12, 2022 2:54 pm
NewHope
says...
Stories forgotten
To old, brown forest leaves blown
Through stormy gullies
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sun Jun 12, 2022 5:12 pm
Kelisot
says...
Through stormy gullies
My hollowness is bigger
A mind of glass breaks
Last edited by
Kelisot
on Sun Jun 12, 2022 9:03 pm, edited 1 time in total.
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
Gender:
Points: 155
Reviews: 30
Sun Jun 12, 2022 5:14 pm
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Kelisot
NewHope
says...
(
@Kelisot
... your addition of my makes your first line six syllables and not five.)
A mind of glass breaks
When thrown to the dusty floor
Like an antique vase
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
Gender:
Points: 371
Reviews: 35
Sun Jun 12, 2022 9:05 pm
Kelisot
says...
(Oops... my bad)
Like an antique vase
Such a fragile life to mourn
My dearest loved ones
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.
beans
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Points: 371
Reviews: 35