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Haiku Train



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Thu Feb 16, 2023 1:37 am
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Liminality says...



Your dreams in a cage,
the broad-leafed tree windblown sways --
it cannot move much.
she/her

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Thu Feb 16, 2023 2:17 am
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Hijinks says...



it can't move much, my
future. i lurch at it with
the grace of june bugs.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 2:37 am
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alliyah says...



The grace of June bugs
Never get me through July
My wings wait restless
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 3:20 am
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creaturefeature says...



my wings wait restless
for the sun; it will come at
the breaking of dawn.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 3:56 am
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Liminality says...



The breaking of dawn
through many heart-shaped leaves glows,
the flame-coloured spots.
she/her

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Thu Feb 16, 2023 4:39 am
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alliyah says...



Those flame-colored spots...
where the sun breaks through the night,
I guess they're called stars.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 3:19 pm
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Plume says...



"I guess they're called stars,"
I whisper. You smile, and
I know I'm in love.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 3:23 pm
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fatherfig says...



what a homesickness
i breathe in the scent of hon-
ey suckle sadness


i know i'm in love
because the world keeps going
the worst sadness there is
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 3:57 pm
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alliyah says...



the worst sadness is
we leave so much un-said, and
we don't hear our hearts. {i never heard you}
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Thu Feb 16, 2023 6:13 pm
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Liminality says...



We don't hear our hearts
over the crickets' music-
silence -- night thickens.
she/her

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Thu Mar 02, 2023 4:53 pm
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Euphory says...



silence - night thickens.
the crescent is bleeding ink
around the north star
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
  





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Fri Mar 03, 2023 8:43 am
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Liminality says...



Around the north star
clouds gather, but the rushing
river cuts the hill.
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Fri Mar 03, 2023 2:00 pm
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creaturefeature says...



river cuts the hill;
we gather together on
the grass, a picnic.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Sat Mar 04, 2023 3:37 am
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starbean says...



the grass, a picnic
always forgives me
while i look at stars
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  





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Sun Mar 05, 2023 5:45 am
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Euphory says...



while i look at stars
my dream sits on the sunrise
high above the ground
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
  








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