9/10. This sentence is absolutely intriguing. It makes me ask the question, "What does it mean?", and since I'm rather curious, it'll make me want to read more, whether or not in this world, people actually have different color blood or if its more of a metaphor. The first part of the sentence is a bit too causual and colloquial for my taste, though.
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I watched men, mutilated and bandaged, lifted into dirty tents, their dirty, bloodied faces wincing with frowning mouths, moaning each an expression of their own injury, together creating a symphony of pain and horror.
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