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Thu Dec 25, 2008 9:26 am
A. Phauox says...



THE ULTIMATE GAME OF QUALITY Vs. QUANTITY

The Goal: To make amazing sentences that continue the story flawlessly and seamlessly.

The Rules:
-You may use five sentences, and no more then five, to further the story.
-A sentence is anything that ends in a period, so a fragment is a sentence.
(-So really, you only get five periods.)
-You may use less then five sentences, but if you use more your entry will be disqualified.
-If your entry is disqualified you may try again after someone else takes a turn.
-Once you've posted your sentences I'll add them to this post so the story can be read as a whole.
-You can not take two turns in a row but you may take as many turns as you want.
-Please check your entries for grammar errors!


The Story:


Single woman seeking man. Must have a job and no criminal record. Coffinless preferred.
For more information please call: (***) 555-5454
-From the Classified Section of The Thompsonton Report Issue #5423 Printed on December 15th



Lucy Longbreeze had put that add in the classifieds more then a month ago for her sister and she was still regretting it, Abby made sure of it. In fact, Abigail Longbreeze had done everything to make sure that her younger sibling had suffered in every way suffering was possible. From rubber snake tricks to making sure there was no hot water when the younger Longbreeze showered, if it could be done it had been done. Well, for the exception of one thing: Lucy was not handed over to Abby’s psychotic ex-boyfriend, who happened to be a vampire.
And, my dear, is it not so bad to be lost?
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