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Mon May 02, 2005 1:50 pm
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Acid_Fairy says...



if i gave you the title 'the surprise' and everyone makes up storyline how many different ones can we come up with?
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 5:52 pm
Rydia says...



Hmm. I suppose we list one plot line each? Okay... A story about a woman planning on telling her husband that she's pregnant.
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 6:10 pm
Cpt. Smurf says...



OK... *cliche alert*

But the baby is not her husband's...
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:10 pm
Icaruss says...



It's her father's.

Incest!
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:11 pm
Emerson says...



I'm not sure the plot lines are meant to be linked? XD


And her father is also her brother. XD
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Mon Sep 10, 2007 9:21 pm
Cpt. Smurf says...



But it's just so much more fun!

And her husband is also her other son.

Something tells me the incestuous themes may have to stop...
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:52 am
Icaruss says...



But it wasn't really her father's son, because the baby was immaculatly concieved by the devil.
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 11:33 am
Rydia says...



Okay, I think that's enough surprises for one plot line and what a strange story that would be!

The Surprise is a story about a child who is going to meet his birth mother for the first time.
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 12:57 pm
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But on the way, the child gets abducted by aliens...
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 1:18 pm
Icaruss says...



And the aliens are his mother. All of them.
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 1:26 pm
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So the child decides to put himself up for adoption again and this time gets adopted by a family of Martians...
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Tue Sep 11, 2007 7:46 pm
Cpt. Smurf says...



Who actually turn out to be fugitives from one of Saturn's rings...
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Sat Sep 29, 2007 10:47 am
Twit says...



But teeny-weeny Saturn-particles are lodged in their blood stream, and blow the family up, taking the child with them.

:twisted: Mwahahahaha


The Surprise is a story about a guinea-pig who lives with a family...
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Mon Oct 01, 2007 11:23 pm
logosgal says...



...of man-eating Venusian Dingos disguised as a normal human family living in the Scottish Highlands.
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Sun Oct 14, 2007 9:41 pm
jonny911 says...



But they get discovered on their family vacation to...
"Son, what do you want to be when you grow up?"
"A felon!"
"Are you sure?"
"Yah! This kid at school says they get all the girls!"
"I should try that..."
  








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