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Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:05 am
Omni says...



Sounds like something that would catch my interest as a short story. Shotglasses themselves are just so distinct of a word that it immediately strikes an image in my head, but Magic just kinda distracts away from it. Maybe finding a synonym for Magic? All around I like it and would definitely click on it.

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Wed Jul 20, 2016 7:40 am
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Seems fantastical at first glance, but upon pondering, the title might as well be a metaphor related to one's life (although the plural form of moon make it read less so). If so, it indicates a deep story, one that would tug reader's heartstrings. I would check it out, and would read it depending on the blurb.

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Wed Jul 20, 2016 1:12 pm
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Time for a new thread! Locking this one.

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