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Wed Aug 05, 2009 6:09 pm
Merlin34 says...



Sounds like a fantasy adventure about deposing some kind of tyrant king.

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Thu Aug 06, 2009 8:22 pm
Krupp says...



I'm guessing this is either fantasy or a thriller. Don't ask me why I think it might be a thriller; I just have a deep, deep hunch. And it's probably wrong haha. I'd probably read it out of mere curiousity due to the fact that I wouldn't know what a myrmidon is without having to look it up...haha.

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Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:20 am
Jamie_rocks says...



It sounds interesting. I'd pick it up to read the flap and see what it's about. I'm not good at guessing the genre, but I'm not picky about fiction, so I'd probably read it. It's definitely an attention grabber.



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Fri Aug 14, 2009 8:12 am
Teague says...



Eh, I probably wouldn't pick it up. The title doesn't really catch my attention, and not much comes to mind when I try to imagine what it'd be about.

It could use some spicing up. ^^

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Fri Aug 14, 2009 9:11 pm
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Depending on which genre it was under and what mood I was in, I might pick it up. It sounds a bit too title-ish, you know? A bit too clever. Like, it sounds neat, and like you only chose it as a title because it sounded neat. You probably didn't, but that's what it sounds like.


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Fri Aug 14, 2009 10:03 pm
Rosendorn says...



I would certainly pick it up to see what it's about. There's a murders undertone that can go in any direction. There's a certain humour twist to it as well, which makes me really wonder about what goes on.

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Fri Aug 14, 2009 10:15 pm
VoxPopulae says...



Hmmm, fantasy? If so, you've chosen a terribly-overdone theme for your title.

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Krupp says...



Sounds like a comedy for some reason. I'd probably buy it.

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Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:37 am
Jamie_rocks says...



Hmm... I'd pick it up, if only because I don't know what an "Apostate" is. I can't really say how catchy it is otherwise, because there's not that much for me to go on.

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Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:01 pm
Maddyc says...



I think I'd be drawn to 'Never Again' if it had a really awesome front cover. I think 'Sending my Heart' sounds a little bit gushier than I'd usually go for.

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Mon Aug 31, 2009 1:04 pm
Binkatong says...



Sounds like some kind of realistic fiction in a small town. Not something I would read, but I just don't like realistic fiction, but my friends would probably read it.

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Mon Aug 31, 2009 5:52 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



Hmm... Realistic fiction? Maybe about a girl who, well, feels useless. Maybe doesn't think she's good at anything until... she meets the guy of her dreams. I hope not! Not that there is anything wrong with that genre, or type of story, but there is something in a super-obvious-and-trying-to-be-dramatic-book-title that turns me off.


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Thu Sep 03, 2009 11:02 pm
Lorrilrakest. says...



It seems like a romance story, but one half is an abuser. No idea why - just at first glance.
I wouldn't read it because i rarely like romance stuff.


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Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:11 pm
Mr.Knightley says...



A Superman fan-fic? Lois as the MC, maybe. :lol: I know that's far fetched, but it was the first thing to come to mind.


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Jetpack says...



I just think Wuthering Heights. Totally romance, despite your denial.

This might be a title at some point:

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