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Sat Sep 12, 2009 3:13 am
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Andie says...



D.E. kind of reminds me of E.T. Maybe it is a sci-fi or fantasy


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Sat Sep 12, 2009 5:07 am
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asxz says...



Sounds to me like a journal-entry written obok about a mid-teen girl who thinks her life is terrible. But in the end it's not that bad. I wouldn't pick it up, because it brings to mind a romance.

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Sat Sep 12, 2009 9:26 pm
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Lorrilrakest. says...



Some kind of vampire novel :L

I'd read the blurb, because i like one-word titles.


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(most definitely not a superhero thing lol)
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Sat Sep 19, 2009 2:56 am
pinkangel54123 says...



Hmm...maybe one of those coming of age type books, or maybe something with a girl trying to find Clarke or something. I'm not very good at this, but it is definitely interesting. I would pick it up.
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Sat Sep 19, 2009 2:39 pm
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Hawkie says...



Hmmm, probably a romance story, maybe with werewolves in it, from the POV of a reasonably young girl. I would read the blurb, at least.

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Mon Sep 21, 2009 1:25 pm
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Khe Sahn says...



Reminds me almost of Narnia... I don't know why. Maybe the whole orphans, mythology? Now I can't get the image out of my head of orphans going through a secret closet to find a magical fantasyland. Sound familiar?

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Mon Sep 28, 2009 12:38 am
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emmylou1995 says...



Reminds me of superhero dogs. And it makes me think of dawn of the dead, just cause the names sound alike. :)

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Wed Sep 30, 2009 12:49 am
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Krupp says...



Cool. Sounds like it could be a chilling tale, whatever it's about..

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Mon Oct 05, 2009 11:10 am
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Nightmares says...



I must say that doesn't leave much to the imagination. It simply sounds like a story about a fighter in the desert. I should hope there is prehaps more to it?

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Sun Dec 27, 2009 2:01 pm
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iceprincess says...



I would definitely pick this book up! It sounds like A Pack of Lies by Anne Fine (she's one of my favourite writers!). If I have time I would read it immediately, but if I don't, I would buy it and take it back home with me. :D

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Wed Dec 30, 2009 11:15 am
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Maddy says...



Hmm, sounds to me like a book reflecting on someone's shady/terrible past? It reminds me of autumn days and sepia. Probably something that I might read the blurb for.

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Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:14 pm
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Krupp says...



Either a comeback story about a person rebuilding their life, or something along those lines...pretty good either way.

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Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:17 am
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Vampiress says...



It sounds like a book about someone who causes fear or has a fear of something that happends everyday.

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:51 am
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Hawkie says...



It sounds like a series of books about wolves and their adventures in the wild - a lot like Warriors.

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Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:56 am
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Kamas says...



Some sad love story. xD


The Court - It's actually a YWS storybook. But whatever :P
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