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Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:10 am
Alice says...



Orion's ten commandments

You shall never fancy yourself to love a woman again
You shall never turn another with your "gift"
You shall never see the sunlight again
You shall save all who deserve it
You shall live for eternity doing it
You shall keep your thoughts to yourself
You shall never suduce a woman
You shall always keep a weary eye on the eastern horizon
You shall always be just a vague memory
You shall find your own kind of joy.


Orion's a vampire just so you know.
I just lost the game.
  





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Wed Jul 18, 2007 4:32 am
logosgal says...



Daniel's Ten Commandments, in order of importance (more or less) as he would list them (more or less):

1. Thou shalt love the Lord thy God with all thy heart, mind soul, and strength.
2. Thou shalt do thy best at all times to preserve human life, even that of thine enemy.
3. Thou shalt d othy best to preserve the health, safety, and well-being of those around thee.
4. Thou shalt avoid doing or saying anything to reveal the secret identities of other super-heroes that thou knowest.
5. Thou shalt avoid doing or saying anything to reveal thine own secret identity.
6. Thou shalt not tell lies. (Directly.)
7. Thou shalt set a good example at all times.
8. Thou shalt respect authority.
9. Thou shalt not endanger thy friendship or thy partnership with Jessie by entering a dating relationship with her. (For now anyway...)
10. Thou shalt not allow thy friends to copy thine math homework. However, thou shalt help them when they ask for it.

(...Yes, he's a goodie and a geek.)


Jessie's Ten Commandments (not in order of importance)

You shall always use good grammar.

You shall never let anyone see you puking after a fight.

You shall not let Daniel know about your crush. Or about Aimee's crush.

You shall not let any boy come (permantly) between you and Aimee. Nor shall you be jealous of Aimee when she gets to be with him without you. Even if she does sometimes get jealous when you get to spend time with him.

You shall avoid doing or saying anything to reveal the secret identities of other super-heroes you know.

You shall avoid doing or saying anything to reveal your own secret identity.

You shall do your best at all times to preserve human life.

You shall do your best at all times to preserve the health and safety of those around you.

You shall not use your super powers to maim, pound, maul, beat, kill or otherwise injure your father.

You shall not tell a (direct) lie.
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Wed Jul 18, 2007 8:27 pm
Fishr says...



Samuel Garrisons' Commandments (I have to two chars with the same first name):

-Put family before duty
-Shrink from authority if able
-Attack, but not kill, for defence purposes
-Never slander or purposely provoke another for the excuse to unsheath weapons
-Remain a devote Protestant
-Remember who you are; family's history, and regardless you are not bound to the strains of the past
-Live free, or die
-Remain a devote member of Sons of Liberty
-Self-sacerfice is not a sin, but honorable, even if your life is gone
-Use your head, and not let raw emotions guide your life
-Embrace your decesions for now they are the footpath to your future

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I think I put 11 but meh...
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  








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