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cinquain poem



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Wed May 13, 2020 12:07 pm
legolas1122 says...



this is how you write it!
it is a 5 line poem.
line 1:one -word general topic
line 2:two adjectives that describe the topic
line 3:three ing-action verbs that describe the topic
line 4:four word phrase about the topic
line 5:a very specific term that explains line one
example
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dessert
cold,creamy
eating , giggling , dripping
cone with three scoops
ice cream
  





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Wed May 13, 2020 12:10 pm
potter4life says...



Laura
funny,wierd
laughing,crying,running
running away when scolded
crying laura
It takes a great deal of bravery to stand up to our enemies, but just as much to stand up to our friends. – Harry Potter and the Sorcerer’s Stone
  





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Wed May 13, 2020 12:11 pm
legolas1122 says...



potter4life wrote:Laura
funny,wierd
laughing,crying,running
running away when scolded
crying laura
Last edited by legolas1122 on Sat Jun 20, 2020 3:11 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Thu May 14, 2020 11:25 am
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legolas1122 says...



let me try one
my sister
mean,sneaky
scolding,reading,playing
always on her phone
Eleanor
:smt020 :smt021 :daddarth
  





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Mageheart says...



I haven't ever written a poem like this before, so I thought I'd try my hand at it! I feel like @Featherstone would appreciate this poem. :)

birds.
swift, deadly,
soaring, hunting, diving,
gliding through the air.
raptors.
mage

[ she/her, but in a boy kinda way ]

roleplaying is my platonic love language.

queer and here.
  





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Thu May 14, 2020 5:38 pm
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Hkumar says...



It looks interesting. Let me try one!

Exams
painful,stressful
studying,crying,learning
help me through this
Semester.
Last edited by Hkumar on Tue May 19, 2020 12:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Fri May 15, 2020 7:44 pm
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alliyah says...



If anyone's interested in the history of cinquains or the different forms they can be written in there's an article on YWS about that here.

Using the American Cinquain form - which uses slightly different requirements; the typical 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllable pattern & different requirements for the lines as well. Here's what I've got!

Month Musings

This May -
feather dust gone -
She's flown away too soon,
left only her shadow to miss.
Time; gone.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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legolas1122 says...



Hkumar wrote:It looks interesting. Let me try one!

Exams
painful,stressful
studying,crying,learning
help me through this
Semester.

wow really is real to exams! :smt023 :smt006
  





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Tue May 19, 2020 7:39 am
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legolas1122 says...



legolas1122 wrote:
potter4life wrote:Laura
funny,wierd
laughing,crying,running
running away when scolded
crying laura

hehe
  





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Tue May 19, 2020 9:14 am
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Hkumar says...




Lockdown
trapped in their houses,
isolating,fighting;
fearing the invisible being
Covid19
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Tue Jun 09, 2020 12:39 pm
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chiefhoco says...



Hkumar wrote:

Lockdown
trapped in their houses,
isolating,fighting;
fearing the invisible being
Covid19



Maybe you can change it 3ing
  





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potter4life says...



Myself(lol)
Disturbing people
Laughing,Talking
running around the house
potter4life
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Liminality says...



Bookshelf
old, compact,
folding, storing, reserving,
texture of dusty accordions,
mind.
she/her

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