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Tue Nov 13, 2018 7:47 pm
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Vervain says...



It sounds like an allegorical novel, low fantasy or realistic, that takes into importance the dichotomy of morality. It sounds a bit heavy handed as far as the message goes, but I might pick it up and thumb through it. Definitely for a more adult audience, or older YA.

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Tue Oct 11, 2022 5:43 am
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Omni says...



not me reviving this

Fun, lighthearted, made for kids or teens, and probably not something I would personally pick off the shelf XD

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Tue Oct 11, 2022 8:04 am
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Hattable says...



sounds very 2015 YWS

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Tue Oct 11, 2022 9:10 pm
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Brigadier says...



@Omni it reminds me of an older phrase of opposites: chalk & cheese
I'd guess it was some sort of fantasy situation. The combination gives me definite LOTR vibes because of elven armory composites. And then, I could see it meaning different things to different age ranges.

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Mon Oct 31, 2022 11:33 pm
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keystrings says...



@Brigadier This title gives me traveling a galaxy in a space ship vibe, or about just using a star as a symbol in the story overall. Which I like, especially as I'm imagining a book cover with a star on it, like someone waiting for another at home.

I'm debating between a couple of titles for my NaNo project this year -- Dreamless is my current one, while others (Waking, Beginning, Drifting) have been messing with me as well to change it to.
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Tue Nov 01, 2022 12:04 pm
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Omni says...



@JustPerks hiiii! I like Dreamless the most out of those picks, as it feels the most vivid of the words. Dreamless gives me realistic modern fantasy vibes, and also young adult vibes. It's definitely something I can see on store shelves and I'd assume it's YA maybe dystopian fiction.

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