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Mon Jun 27, 2016 9:34 am
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Username: Pompadour
Guest Judge?: Can't! Internet issues shall be the blight of me.
Poem Title: morning has wrung out her sleeves
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morning has wrung out her sleeves
and has settled on the clothesline of the sky
to dry, to watch all her worries as they become
clouds, whisked away in a whirlwind
of flying dervishes and dutchmen.
[[these play harnesses to the wind.]]

morning is calm. the trees lay their heads
against the concrete walls of the plaza;
the wind rushes past, and the trees kiss
concrete teeth. bells tinkle, and dew
falls, gently, from morning's drooping sleeves.
[[dewdrops play the sky’s mourning eyes.]]

the morning, and the trees, and the wind
are harnessed; i watch them, sleepless,
eyes hammocked and body tired, but mind
ringing, ringing, ringing.

the bells on the newspaper boy's bicycle
echo in my head, even as he
echoes, down this street
and into the next--
there are thoughts driving
cataclysms into the cleft in my skull
that has been worn deep by nights of rugged tiredness.

i wander palaces, and tombs, and places
where the wind passes me by. my lips press
against the cool, cold skin
of awareness, and awakening;
the smell of sharp citrus bites into my skin.

oh, this is how it feels
to be alive; this is how it aches.

but with my hair pulled taut over pillowsheets,
and eyes pinned to the ceiling, i feel
like a moth in a glass cylinder. i am
trapped, wings fluttering, wind
wandering; i see
and am not seen, by morning's first light.
i hear, and am not heard
by the sound of morning bells.
i feel, and am not felt
by trees grazing unfeeling skin.

i wander, and do not,
as morning slips on her cloak
and enters day;
[[night veils himself in dawn.]]

the glass cylinder is flooded
with the sights and sounds
of peace.

so good night, bells,
it is daylight,
and sleep has come for me.
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Wed Jun 29, 2016 1:38 am
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Username: DragonWriter22
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Poem Title: Silver Raindrops
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Silver raindrops, golden sun

Saphire rivers toss and run

Amethyst berries, dark as stone

Elven king sits on diamond throne

Topaz land with amolite shades

Cool green moss like dark green jades

Moon of opal in the sky

Garnet grasslands soft and dry

Emerald dragon under tree

Ruby fish deep under the sea
Last edited by DragonWriter22 on Tue Jul 05, 2016 3:21 am, edited 1 time in total.
No. For the last time, I don't write on dragons!

I am the Night Rider! Wait, I mean the Night Writer! Ah, no. Well, I do write at night, but... I am the Knight Writer of the Green Room! There we go. :D
  





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Wed Jun 29, 2016 2:44 am
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Username: ElizabethLovelace
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Poem Title: The Man Who Tried to Be a God
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Graffiti
The argument is well known
Is it art
Or is it vandalism

The crisp yellows
In neat little lines
The reflective yellows
Just pointing a sign

A sign to a gem
A gem to a bank
And from the bank
You get to the smuggling man

A dangerous occupation
Even if they aren't
Making an interfering
Deal

For the ones that we love
We would do any task
Even if it involves death
Sometimes even a mask

Heroes hide behind the truth
Not letting their emotions show through
They rest with angels
That is their way

But don't for a moment think
They are angels
They are not gods
They are not immortal

All men will fall someday
Because you can try
And be almighty
But you will fall as a human

the brigadier rides again!
LMS VI: Lunch Appointment with Death

  





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Sat Jul 02, 2016 2:49 am
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Username: Audy
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Poem Title: joy like chilies
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Sun Jul 03, 2016 9:06 pm
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Username: Garedvite
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Poem Title: Early Autumn Soldiers
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Green men with white hats,

pinheads sticking out, these

early Autumn soldiers,

marching steadily uphill.

-

He will raise you, he said.

He will capture your mother

and keep her under his bed.

He bought the sun and stars

and stuck them to the floor.

-

Blue warpaint, you will be ready

When you split in half.

After marching uphill

You'll greet us like lovers;

plucking out our eyes.
Formerly Hightop


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Thu Jul 07, 2016 2:26 pm
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The first round thread is up! Poetry Wars Everyone wish @bluewaterlily and @DragonWriter22 luck!
  





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Thu Jul 14, 2016 4:28 am
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Username: thecolorofthesky
Guest Judge?: Yes!
Poem title: Beautiful
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Beauty:

the quality present in a thing or person

that gives intense pleasure

or deep satisfaction to the mind.

If I showed you the marvelous stars,

their endless light

and the infinite colors of the sky.

Would you believe it when I told you

that you are made of those things?

The most undiscovered parts of nature

share much with you

not just in composition,

but in unrivaled beauty.

They hold a sacred purity to them,

a raw form of beauty.

The wild, vibrant birds of the jungle

are as liberated and confident as your soul.

Your will in all its power

stands as sure and unmoving

as the breathtaking mountains topped with snow

But that is not the only truth to you

There is little difference

between your scars on your body

and the cracks in the earth.

The ones that produce the dazzling gems.

Darling,

You are a force of nature

worthy of love and awe.
It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.
- e.e. cummings
  





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Fri Jul 15, 2016 2:33 am
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Username: penfeme
Guest Judge?: Sure!
Poem Title: all that I am is starlight, dim
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I want the legacy of fire ablaze past my six feet under curfew.
I want constellations that draw existence to knees. God knows we need the scrapes and bruises of a forest burned down but the joy-birds still singing.
~
and tonight I set myself free
from a crooked coffin
with the summer black blue,
and the great smoke
white pillows, stars laying their
wandering heads upon them
like best friends who stayed
for frights of a horror flick,
Thunder and Lightning.

I gaze and shake the darkroom tray
Of my mind, feeling the teardrop's muse of running back to the ocean of Where I Belong

Struck I don't know how the wind moves me east to 7pm sunsets.
~
my eyes' switch flips on
as I watch the brazen streetlights, incredulous, blocking my awestruck view,

'what did it' I ask
and feel the air change and expand, like Catharsis and the Moon married and had a daughter, me
in all my invisible freckles
and obvious flaws.

I see,
it was the occurrence
that I am simply earth
molded destiny -
a bird flying just for
the air is free.

it was my clearing iris,
washed by the rain,
the bully gates of gated community safety.
it was christmas lights
gone wrong
but the thought
that counted.

staring down the epiphany sunlight in the dark past
midnight and this beating
heart of passion, I see all
that I am:

simple soul, covered wonderful,mysteriously in dust.
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Sat Jul 16, 2016 12:09 am
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The second round is up! Poetry Wars: The Battle, Updated:7-15 Everyone wish @ElizabethLovelace and @Gardevite luck!
  





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Mon Jul 18, 2016 10:15 am
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Username: DragonWriter22
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Poem Title: Lionheart
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The image of the boldened king

Is found in many forms

From one of swords and valor

To wisdom, scrolls and words


Mighty though, above the rest

Another now does rise

His heart enclosed, the living flame

It lies within his chest


The burning rage can’t be contained

And leaks into his eyes

Few of realm can thus withstand

Those awful golden fires


His paws are quick with lightning speed

His roar like thunder after

No clouds above can shield his wrath

Or mask his stately embers


His mane is long, he needs no crown

Been wrought in lesser blaze

He is himself, how proud and strong

No need of knights or blades
No. For the last time, I don't write on dragons!

I am the Night Rider! Wait, I mean the Night Writer! Ah, no. Well, I do write at night, but... I am the Knight Writer of the Green Room! There we go. :D
  





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Thu Jul 21, 2016 6:32 pm
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Aley says...



This week's war is going to be between @Rydia and @Pompadour so head over to Poetry Wars: The Battle, Updated:7-21 and get your votes in!
  





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Thu Jul 21, 2016 9:59 pm
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Ok, ok. Here. Have this.

Username: Meshugenah
Guest Judge?: Maybe! Right now I can, but once the school year starts again, it's a bit iffy.
Poem Title: summer, '09
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it was dark by the time we crossed
stumbling punch drunk in the almost twilight
of warm july and a deserted corner of brooklyn
explored as far as the nearest open starbucks
(across the street and to the left,
lit beacon of overpriced sugar
and excuses for giddiness deemed
too far afield for twenty-somethings
who took themselves seriously
because no one else would)

you don’t remember crossing back,
but you remember the ac unit and teeny table
and concentric rings of condensation
only slightly more permanent
than signing the bridge in yellow highlighter

we were here, we were here, we were here.
***Under the Responsibility of S.P.E.W.***
(Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)

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Poem Title The Study of Cortical Decoupling and Mind-Wandering
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you are a hole of the way things should be, a taste of a home i never knew and never got the chance to squander like so many others have done. it’s the way you’ve always been like cigarette-butt burns in the skin like someone took a hole punch to your leg and punched, punching away, leaving maroon and salmonella bruises mottled to perfection, and the way you place your feet looks like you’re trying to run away from me, just like everything else in this ruination of a life and i think you lie when you promise me that you’ve never- been a dancer- i mean, just look at the way you place your feet! the stars wink when you make your promises, like they’re in on the whole charade, but indoors is too confining and final, voices echoing back in the closeness of the walls, and the whole earth breathes through the crack in the door and i can hear it… wheezing, so yes, outdoors is so much better, even if the snide stars do wink, snickering, but i don’t care: they’ve always looked like glowing cigarette butts anyway, and they’ve always had a home, even if they choose to leave it in flaming fury like so many others have done. i know one of these stars will point the way your feet faced when you leave me like the leaves will leave these trees around us because it’s almost fall again, and the aspens will strike and scratch the sky in their bareness and leave scars that, if you could see them, would look like the lines aeroplanes leave behind and float away so silently like where do the leaves go anyway? if i can find that place, will i find you there when you leave me?
Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

-Elena Passarello, Animals Strike Curious Poses
  





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Fri Jul 22, 2016 3:41 am
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Username: Casanova
Guest Judge: nah, can't.
Poems Name: SJH
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I dreamt about you the other night
A long dream, no end in sight
You held me tight, and kissed me slowly
I fell in love with you again unknowingly
I found another to keep me safe
But I have you, just in case
The one I desire above all else
The love I keep stored on a shelf
We can't talk anymore
But the last words you spoke I so adore
"Matthew I love you," was the last thing I heard
To get you back, the idea is simply absurd
The thought of us is in the past
Simply put, never asked
~
I thought I was doing better than I had before
The truth is I dropped everything, fell to the floor
A recollection of what we used to be
A nervousness that's for all to see
Pain seeps through the cracks of my mind
Blurring my vision, slowing the time
A startled vision of you comes near
A lost memory, a nothingness appears
Darkening my mind, destroying my thoughts
A world of unknown pain, free but never bought
A light flickers in the distance
Try to fight, try to resist it
The will I have slowly dies
Once smiling, now only cries
~
Her memory envelops my entire being
I can feel her presence without even seeing
I looked up to the sky in the hours before dawn
I yelled to the moon, and the night stifled a yawn
It's nothing new for me to do this
To sit on these steps and reminisce
To reflect on what we once shared
To think of how you showed you cared
My heart still beats only for you
My mind speaks only the words true
A knife pulled, a heart broken
A gun dropped, feelings awoken
A hole carved in the soul of the young
Secrets lost, a slip of the tongue
~
How can I stay in a world so cold?
I want to wait, but the loss is old
I shouldn't be here, I shouldn't stay
I should try everything to keep you away
But I keep coming back
Wishing I could hear your laugh
Willing to travel a million miles
Just to see your sweet smile
To see the look on your face when I say I love you
To be there with you, no matter where you go to
I'll always be here, waiting
I'll never leave, I'm done debating
You're the life that I want, the one that I need
I was given warnings but I decided not to heed
~
My mind was mixed, a feeling in between
A smile on my face, pain not being seen
A laugh in my chest
But the spark in my eyes left
It went away when you did
It fell away, went off the grid
I found someone else a few weeks ago
She wrapped me tight and held me close
But it's not the same as it was
I don't know why, the only answer I have is,"Just because."
She smiles differently than you did, I remember
The day I first saw you, late December
I think back, and it leaves me in tears
When I wake up, I'm over come by my fears.
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Fri Jul 22, 2016 1:07 pm
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Username: RippleGylf
Guest Judge?: No, thank you.
Poem Title: Anthill
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I am not one
who would relish the chance
to prove my worth in the City.
Too busy, too noisy,
with every ant scuttling about
only to run into another
mound of metal.
Instead of reaching for the stars,
they wrench the stars from
their celestial homes only
to drag them down,
snaring the light in cotton webs.
Even their toy boats
join the beacon, reaching for
what, exactly?
Acknowledgement?
Perhaps an onlooker from on high
could see the collective glare,
but the rest of us only see pinpricks,
competing with the sun and the sky.
"Eternity, I hear you calling, but you will not have me yet."
  








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