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Sun Aug 30, 2020 2:33 pm
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Starve says...



blazing with anger,
fingers tapping at a screen
send emotion-bits.
  





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Sun Aug 30, 2020 5:36 pm
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alliyah says...



These emotion crumbs -
leftovers from pain long gone
will be swept away.
maybe i make up colors for poetic cadence, but i don't think i can ever love someone who doesn't understand that teal is a different color than dark cyan
  





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Sun Aug 30, 2020 8:22 pm
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Hkumar says...



will be swept away
by the wave of emotions
into the unknown.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sun Oct 18, 2020 4:21 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



the unknown is a
more familiar place than
clear understanding.
No one has the power to shatter your dreams unless you give it to them.
  





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Sun Oct 18, 2020 4:38 pm
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starlitmind says...



clear understanding
cannot exist when we don't
understand ourselves
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Sun Oct 18, 2020 7:57 pm
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Hkumar says...



understand ourselves
through quiet introspection
embracing the truth.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sun Oct 18, 2020 8:12 pm
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Euphoria8 says...



Embracing the truth,
no matter how difficult,
enlightens the soul
If you don't think you're worth it, then you're blind to your own beauty
OPEN UP YOUR EYES
  





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Wed Oct 21, 2020 11:20 am
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Hkumar says...



enlightens the soul
by planting seeds of self-love,
letting it spread joy.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Fri Oct 23, 2020 10:44 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



let the joy spread far
and wide, slowly oozing as
buoyant lava does.
No one has the power to shatter your dreams unless you give it to them.
  





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Fri Oct 23, 2020 11:45 pm
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starlitmind says...



bubbly lava drips
from the sky, a product of
the hate we unleash

Spoiler! :
@whatchamacallit @Hkumar this is kind of random, but I love seeing you guys post here <3

Hkumar, I love how your latest haiku is so positive. You always include meaningful and powerful imagery in your haikus, even when they are simple images. I feel like you could make a haiku with any and every single line given to you. I love reading how you make the lines given to you your own <3

whatcha, your imagery is always so unique, and you bring thought provoking ideas to my mind. "the unknown is a more familiar place" one is probably one of my favourite ones you've written. That's such a neat concept to think about. And "buoyant lava"? I absolutely love that line!

YOU GUYS ARE COOL
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Sat Oct 24, 2020 8:23 pm
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Hkumar says...



the hate we unleash
from the cracks of broken heart,
let it channel out.

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@starlitmind Thank you so much <3
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:20 pm
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Yoshikrab says...



let it channel out
the hateful sorrow and grief
no more joy again
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:36 pm
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LUNARGIRL says...



no more joy again
it has evaporated
and now it is gone.
"ONE CANNOT BE BRAVE WHO HAS NO FEAR."
  








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