I like them both, the second sounds the most interesting to me but also the most complex so I'm not sure if you'd maybe want to make it a little more simple?
I really liked both ideas, but I think the 2nd one is more original, and I am certianly interested in joining the storybook if you choose either, but especially the 2nd option.
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Chuck Norris- worshiping gnomes, undead pandas, pet chupacabras and undead Keanu Reeves-what could possibly go wrong?
Hey, both ideas rock. However, the second option is a bit more creative since it can give way to more adventure and distraction from the main flow. See, the first idea deserves a fewer writers because it needs to follow its story well.
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