Hello there. So I've been here for a while and I decided to start up my very first Storybook (yay)! Now since I haven't done anything like this before you'll have to bare with me (and give advice along the way, hahha).
Now I haven't give a rating yet as I do not mind how vulgar your posts are. Which I hope will make people feel a lot more easier to put whatever they want. However if someone is a little uncomfortable please tell me and I shall put a limit. Now for some rules. Please no God like characters. Talk to other people to find out more of there characters. And there is a limit to how many people in this Storybook (seeing as it's my first ever one ^^'). The limit is five. Sorry!
Now for the plot!
There are four main planets; Neroi, Usewa, Mehic and Jelof. Neroi is filled with wildlife, fresh air and too many trees. Whereas Usewa is a place filled with factories and urban lifestyle. Mehic takes a futuristic tone with flying cars and laser guns. Then there is Jelof, a place without a sun, all citizens live near the core and are filled with dark days.
For a long time each of these plants lived peacefully beside each other. Until now. According to the people of Jelof they no longer want to live in a world of darkness. So the begged their neighbouring planets to give them some help with recovering light and warmth to their world. And when that didn't happen they started war. Before long each planet was ready to kill each other.
Which is where this story takes place. Your character is from one of these planets believe that what your planets army is doing is right. However just a little part of you wants this to stop. You want to try and help Jelof get light back. However you know if you express your feelings only execution awaits you. That's when you discover five other people just like you (the rest of the characters). You band together ready to take on everything you've been told about the evil of those other planets.
So here is what you need to fill in.
Name:
Nickname/Likes to be called(if any):
Age:
Sex:
Looks:
Outfit:
Power(if any):
Weapon(if any):
Strength:
Weakness:
Home Planet:
Personality:
Fun Facts:
History:
Now each character does(or did) have a father. Now each man from each household was involved within this war somehow. So give some info on what the father thinks.
So I hope this is a good enough starting point for my very first Storybook. Please tell me what could be better and please submit your character.
Oh almost forgot to add my character.
Name: Deloi Hail
Likes to be called: Green
Age: 18
Looks: Somewhat tall with dark green hair that reaches her waist. Along with her dark green is her equally green eyes which gave her the nickname Green.
Outfit: Wears a bronzed colored tank-top, a white shawl is tied around her waist, she also has a bronzed colored knee length skirt that is neatly ripped up her left leg. On her feet she wears leather buckled boots.
Weapon: Uses a set of laser guns which she keeps within her shawl.
Strength: Good with long/short range wepons. So finds it comfortable with using guns.
Weakness: Finds one-on-one combat difficult and uses her fists (or sword if near by) as a last resort.
Home Planet: Mehic
Personitly: Deloi is a girl that enjoys to laugh and is normally one to look on the brighter side of things. She is one to charge head first within a battle which leads to carelessness. She is most likely to start an argument and always thinks her answer is right. However when the chips are down Deloi is most certainly able to find a joke within the darkest times.
Fun Facts: Because she is used to living within Mehic she despises most things involving nature.
History: Growing up she was a child that enjoyed to learn of new things. She grew up with a normal childhood, which she always classed as boring. Because of her green colour combo she was somewhat bullied so didn't have much friends, she tries to make up for it now. When her father first started in the war she begged him not to go. However when he left for the battlefield she left home. A year has passed and she hasn't heard anything of her family.
If anyone has anything they think I should add please tell me. So happy character making
~ G.G (Gamergirl)
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