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The Silver Chalice



To you think this idea for a Storybook stinks?

YES!
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8%
NO!
6
50%
Change the title/plot
5
42%
 
Total votes : 12


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Thu Apr 13, 2006 1:42 pm
Araidne says...



This is an RPG.

Setting: A school for those who show signs of one of the great powers.

Plot:The students have learned their crafts, they are sent out to do six tasks to complete their training.The country in which this takes place is torn a part by greedy lords. The only thing that can unite the country is the Silver Chalice.( a chalice is a goblet)

Characters: You can come up with your own, But on their powers, please give them one main power, and a sub power.
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Fri Apr 14, 2006 12:47 am
Dynamo says...



This sounds very similar to something I created last night. My storybook is called Young Ninjas.
  





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Fri Apr 14, 2006 1:23 am
Griffinkeeper says...



I'd change the setting, I like the idea of the tasks, but I don't like the idea of the school.

Then again, I may or may not write here.
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Fri Apr 14, 2006 10:49 pm
Araidne says...



Ok. Sratch the school. :D
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Mon Apr 17, 2006 10:41 pm
Karma says...



Whoops.... :? I voted yes as in good storybook, not as in this stinx, sorry!
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Tue Apr 18, 2006 1:34 pm
Araidne says...



A O.k. Karma!A o.k. :D
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Tue Apr 18, 2006 3:04 pm
David Guinness says...



Erm.. to me it sounds like Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire with three extra tasks. But still, sounds interesting. :)

Perhaps a private mentor's tasks?
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Tue Apr 18, 2006 3:33 pm
Araidne says...



I was a little afraid it would seem that way.
Out flew the web, and floated wide,
The mirror cracked from side to side.
'The curse has come upon me' cried
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Wed May 03, 2006 7:18 pm
Shadow says...



I like it. There's nothing wrong with stealing ideas. You could say there's a meeting because of this problem and they have to choose a group of people to go out and find the chalice. That abolishes the school and the HP links. There could be some elders and a selection of tests to choose who will go. Do we start here or are you going to start another one once you've got the plot sorted?
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