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Sat Mar 31, 2007 2:32 am
Griffinkeeper says...



I'm not sure how well a drow would work out, most of the characters seem to work mostly in the daytime.

Still, that could be solved with a simple modification. And if not, well, the elves ARE desperate for help. Beggars can't be choosers can they?
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Sat Mar 31, 2007 2:35 am
Rasi says...



Elven Maiden, please join!! :)

Goldie I agree with Dark Lordess, you should definetly find a way to stay in I love your character! :)
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Sat Mar 31, 2007 3:57 am
Sumi H. Inkblot says...



Dark Lordess wrote:Hey Goldie

More ideas instead of dropping out - He's a gardener. He could be a healer. (You know with herbs or something) Every army needs a healer.

Yeah! Or someone who knows the area of battle...a area-planner? A spy? Someone who can concoct poisons? A trap-setter? Pinkle's got all sorts of possibilities!(Though I dearly hate that commercial!)
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Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:05 am
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Heck, the gardener could be one of the displaced refugees. After the battle, the gardener joins the army.

Just because he was a gardener before, doesn't mean that's what he'll always be.

It's called character growth.
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Sat Mar 31, 2007 9:04 am
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Rasi... Flins the rogue! rogue-thief/trap placer/disarmer/pickpocket/lock-picker, all in one!
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Sat Mar 31, 2007 4:41 pm
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Yay! I'm so excited!! :elephant:

Throw a cloak on her and put her back to the sun, she'll be okay during day. She'll just be very cranky :P
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
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Sat Mar 31, 2007 7:03 pm
Jules the jester says...



If an evil character is in need then i shall keep Beare alive/going. I do believe that an evil chracter would be in need near the end of the quest when the final confrontation takes place.

I belive that the gardener does have a place in the story. Just look at LOTR, sam is just a gardener to start off with but transforms into an orc killing machine lol. :lol:

Anyway. I have to add a few more things about my character.

He is of a strange religion unknown to any of the others and before going into battle he always stabs his swords into the groud and prays in a strange language. :D
  





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Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:10 am
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I'm just wondering, when are we going to start this again? :P
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Sun Apr 01, 2007 2:55 pm
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Yes indeed. Oh by the way APRIL FOOLS DAY.(sorry)

I think that we should start it as soon as possible. but not with all teh charcters in one place. but start it with some toegther and the others filtering into the village.
  





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Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:01 am
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I agree with Jules. That way, it won't be a completely different storyline. We can kind of adapt it from the old one.
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 3:56 pm
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Ok so when do we start? and why dark lordess is no one else posting. i Say revoulution is needed
  





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Mon Apr 02, 2007 4:26 pm
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So we're starting over? Completely? Or are we using the good stuff from the last one, and building on it? Oh dear, I am sore confused...

About Pinkle: Thanks for all your suggestions, guys.... I've got no idea which one to choose. While a healer or a spy would be a great idea, I know absolutely nothing about healing or spying. I do best when somebody else throws my character into a situation, and I work with it. Eh! What should I do?

And are we starting soon? Like, now?

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Mon Apr 02, 2007 5:16 pm
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Goldie, were building off what we had just changing it a bit, not starting over. :D Who's going to start it?
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Mon Apr 02, 2007 6:11 pm
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I will! I WILL! :!: :!: :mrgreen:

If no one else minds that is. we coudl always play rock papaer scissors!
  





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Mon Apr 02, 2007 7:05 pm
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Sounds good to me Jules. :D Oh, Rasi says thats okay too.
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