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Tue Apr 23, 2013 6:59 pm
KingLucifer says...



Actually I switched Nephil's posistion to Palace Guard, I thought Scarlett would catch that. But I hope you could settle for General instead?
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Tue Apr 23, 2013 7:13 pm
StoneHeart says...



XD, I might be able to live with that. . . .

No, I can't. Sorry, Generals have to deal with all kinds of things that I have zero knowledge about. Sorry, I'll post my profile tomorrow and see about somebody else (Character slots can be added/removed) ><
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 4:59 am
ScarlettFire says...



I am so blind. I can fix it. And did you guys not notice the line below the character slots? We can add and remove as we like, so if you both want to be a palace guard, that's totally fine.

Also, jordin. I assume this is a small band of human hating Elves that your Arthurion belongs to? I'm pretty sure most elves in the Karalia universe don't share his hatred of humankind, or almost any life. They're not very much inclined to violence unless provoked. At least, in my mind, that is.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 6:51 am
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I also like how he says on his character profile that his strength makes him practically invincible, haha, Amara and Nephil will like to say otherwise to that.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:02 am
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I know what you mean. Like "Tell that to the oldest dragon in the kingdom" XD

I might ask him to reconsider saying that, too. No character is invincible, no matter how hard one tries to enforce it or make it so. Trust me. There is always a weakness, a way to destroy that so-called invincible being.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:07 am
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Oh I know, a simple solution to it, he see's into the future for 45 seconds? the character at the time will be unable to act in those 45 seconds, and by time they can whatever they saw in the future has already come to pass and gone. This would make the ability useless in combat and even a fatal flaw at the wrong time.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:08 am
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Agreed, LH. I can see what you're saying here. That is a severe limitation.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:35 pm
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XD not totally un-thought through, so expect Palace Guard #2 to arrive in the evening.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:52 pm
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Terry/Tara will be causing trouble within the city in an effort to destabilize the situation and reap the rewards, if that's okay with you, Scar.

This will probably mean they'll meet with Ygor fairly frequently, if you catch my drift.
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Wed Apr 24, 2013 1:54 pm
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Oooh, plots to dethrone the Queen. Yay!
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Yes, but also things which are... smaller. Influential noblemen, merchants, working men. They can start small (please note the small) plagues and stuff. Poison drinking water.

Anything that chips away at Karalia's pillars of society, basically.
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Fri Apr 26, 2013 5:40 pm
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I'm having interwebz problems at home. I'll read the story here at work when I can, and I'll type up my posts at home and copy/paste em here at work again -.-

I figure not everybody has to be in the first few opening scenes anyway. If anyone has something specific they wanna work out PM me

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Fri Apr 26, 2013 7:39 pm
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LouisCypher wrote:Terry/Tara will be causing trouble within the city in an effort to destabilize the situation and reap the rewards, if that's okay with you, Scar.

This will probably mean they'll meet with Ygor fairly frequently, if you catch my drift.


Will either one be related to the current problem with magic slowly disappearing from the land? because I can suggest Amara and Terry/Tara, could be enemies for this.
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Fri Apr 26, 2013 10:19 pm
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XD people, SB overload, have to eliminate one. . . .

Sorry.
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Fri Apr 26, 2013 10:39 pm
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I, um, apologise for still not having the profile up. Say I had technical difficulties (read: it crashed and everything got lost) along with offline life eating away my time x_x
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