Young Writers Society

Thanks Catcha Sorry again about the ridiculously huge post. Alph I can tell is going to make an excelent comic relief xD

Thanks, methrirr

Epic posts by all.

Also, one note: humans float in water, and not sink. Common misconception.

I sink. I've tried. Even with a full breath of air, I'm so un-fat that I sink like a rock. xD

And Cspr, I sincerely hope Blaze isn't refering to Raven and Mike as "children" and that those are just two totally different people that he encountered in the forest. They are both 16 years old, juniors in highschool basically.

He's referring to the Stone kids.

Ah. Just the fact that you had to "look up" (tragic and idiotic missunderstanding on my part) implied that they were above you. I had failed to realize that you were originally looking down. Sorry about any confusion. xD Ever have one of those days where you're just dumb? That's today for me xD

XD It's fine.

hope my last post was OK :D

I'm still new to storybooks, but you tend not to write from the other character's perspective, right?

Um. I'm just trying to figure out a) why the kids would be so trusting (then again, maybe I'm paranoid and they were sheltered, weren't they?) and b) how I could make Blaze make it all logical in his head.

He's a pretty shoddy actor. Then again, I suppose Katie saw him for what he was.

I don't exactly intend for him to be a hero, see. Not a villain, either, but he's... A bit warped. I feel sort of bad for writing him into the space of children. XD

A bit warped? what about my character? He's a multi-personality crazed madman with a possible chance of insanity

Otherwise, I believe Blaze and Luna may have a lot in common. Of course, Blaze may be a bit madder. XD As one can see if they read his opener.

Can I add Blaze into my post? I just don't know what to write,,, halp?

I don't know if you guys wanted to do anything epic during the night, but I'm going to go ahead and start the next day with this next post.

Why sure, of course, Winter. I'll go read up and see if I have any tips...

Anything you want me to change?

I'm sorry I haven't been posting... When I do my next post, which people (if any) should I enounter?

It's up to you, Mort. You could meet mike and Raven, I suppose, since we'll be wandering around a bit anyway. It would make sense. But there's also Alex, who's all alone.