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The Curse of the Marie Celeste DT



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Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:36 pm
Nook says...



Oh, don't worry. ^^
Stuff like that happens. It's all just for plotline purposes. I'm sure Red has something extra in store for you. ;)
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Fri Mar 01, 2013 11:55 pm
AlmondEyes says...



Yea, I guess. I just don't like that Red has Temperance out of character. It grinds my gears for some reason.
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Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:59 am
Chiridawn says...



Everyone should be careful how they interpret 'weakness'. I think next time, we should change the character description: instead of 'weakness', 'flaws' would probably work better.
  





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Sat Mar 02, 2013 1:51 am
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Shadowlight says...



Also we all need to understand that misinterpretations of characters happen. :3 I've had it happen a bunch of times and I've DONE it too- we just need to either let it roll off our shoulders, deal with it with the writer who's done it or work with the post- I mean that post WAS from REDDY'S point of veiw- Maybe on her way down Temperance was offered that mug by another Sailor for spotting land. :3 it's all in how you see it. :3
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Sat Mar 02, 2013 5:19 am
RedBird says...



I'm sorry if you were offended, janika!From Temperance's profile and the situation at hand, it seemed to make sense. I can change the post, if you wish.
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Mon Mar 04, 2013 1:53 am
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Just so everyone is aware, I changed the end of my last post...
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Mon Mar 04, 2013 2:13 am
Alvarin says...



I'm going to post tomorrow, since I'm too tired right now. If anyone from the Llorona wants to be mentioned in my post in some way, feel free to say so now. I've already got Gray and Tommy covered, but I'm not sure what to do with the rest of you.
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Tue Mar 05, 2013 11:53 pm
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Guys, I've posted. And Nailah's going on a little adventure of her own if you don't mind. xD

We should continue... I really don't want this SB to die. :D
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Wed Mar 06, 2013 12:15 am
Alvarin says...



I'm working on a post now and will have it done sometime tonight :)
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Wed Mar 06, 2013 1:45 am
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For the crew of the Syren: don't everyone go dispersing to different places, now we've reached shore. Nailah's going off on her own for supplies, but we need a small party to go find the person who knows the location of the MC, and we also need someone to stay and guard the ship.

Also, here's a bit about the person(s) who know the location of the MC:

Kenneth Dunn is a young sailor in the British Navy, who was wrecked in the Sea of Weeds. He was the only survivor, and he was alone in the lifeboat. However, he also had a compass and a sextant, and therefore he could take the latitude/longitude of his location when he passed the MC, which he knew to be special. Everyone else thinks he's crazy, but he's also told his lover here in San Juan, Rachel de la Mura. They both know the location of the ship, but Nicco and the rest aboard the Syren only know about Kenneth.
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Wed Mar 06, 2013 1:51 am
Shadowlight says...



Imogen will stay on the ship. we don't need her running into her brother too soon. XD
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Wed Mar 06, 2013 5:40 am
RedBird says...



Okay, Alvarin, I loved John's post, and I want you to keep it, but for those of you on the Syren, let's make some posts about how we find Kenneth Dunn, how we encountered the Llorona's crew, etc., before we get down the real fight :)
And remember...A portkey can be any sort of harmless object...A football...or a dolphin.
~Snape, AVPM

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