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Sun May 19, 2013 2:13 am
EloquentDragon says...



I don't believe Daniel actually goes to school. (Why would he need to, afterall.)

A confrontation b/tw Anrea and Akiza would definitely be interesting. Janika---I want to see where to take the "materialization" powers of Akiza's.
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Sun May 19, 2013 2:25 am
AlmondEyes says...



Meaning you want to see them fight and Akiza's power manifest?
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Sun May 19, 2013 2:25 am
KingLucifer says...



Andrea is definitly at a disadvantage with Akiza, first because Andrea has one bad arm that she can't use. Seconde Akiza has a powerful mind and won't be as easy for Andrea to control her, third Akiza's new materialization powers will be hard to counter. It's going to be a hard fight, but not impossible to win.
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Sun May 19, 2013 2:41 am
AlmondEyes says...



Hm.
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Sun May 19, 2013 3:21 am
AdventurerDaniel says...



Daniel goes to school because he only occasionally remembers bits of the past and because his fake parents make him. don't worry his parents are about to be a plot point.
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Wed May 22, 2013 2:00 am
AlmondEyes says...



Ok, so should I post? Or should I let someone start it off? As in, should someone see Akiza and Andrea getting into it? Maybe Loyal should start it off. How should this start off?
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Wed May 22, 2013 2:59 am
KingLucifer says...



My plan to make Akiza fall in line is to have the two have a deal, Andrea manages to knockout Akiza, Akiza follows orders and stops using her abilities so openly. Akiza wins and she never has to listen to Andrea or Daniel again.
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Wed May 22, 2013 3:18 am
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Akiza doesn't use her abilities openly. The way you propose it, as it sounds to me, is that Akiza is using her abilities without regard for anything or anyone and that she's out of line. Also, I mena how is the confrontation going to start, not different scenarios as to how it's going to play out.
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Wed May 22, 2013 3:33 am
KingLucifer says...



Well testing out materialization would be an idea, though honestly I would have stuck to something that actually has something to do with Empathy.
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Wed May 22, 2013 3:46 am
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It's not really an ability, it's just an after effect of her losing control of her ability. She can't actually control it.
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Thu May 23, 2013 12:07 am
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So am I supposed to post first? No one ever answered my question as to who would start this off....
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Thu May 23, 2013 2:19 am
EloquentDragon says...



Uh... yes I did. I suggested that you go first. I don't know if this will work though guys, will try our best and hope, I suppose
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Thu May 23, 2013 3:01 am
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I would really rather it be Daniel do it, but Ok, and Elo, if I had saw that you had answered my question, then I wouldn't have asked again, and since I did, isn't it obvious that I didn't catch it? I'll start my post tomorrow when I get home from school.
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Fri May 24, 2013 3:04 am
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I'm working on my post, but it may take a while. If someone wants to post the beginning of Akiza and Andrea's argument, then be my guest. I stuck like chuck at the moment :/
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Tue May 28, 2013 4:03 pm
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Is anyone going to post besides me?
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