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Sun Feb 03, 2013 9:28 pm
Alvarin says...



StellaThomas wrote:What if Reyla's parents bit off more than they could chew by trying to take the House by surprise one sunny day? Or Damian was acting in revenge for a friend murdered?


The first suggestions sounds pretty good :) Damian doesn't have any friends. Plenty of "friends", but not anyone that he cares about.
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Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:17 pm
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Stella you obviously didn't read Reyla's history, let me show you what happened.

the job was simple, drive out a pack of werewolves that was in a near by forest that made hit and run attacks on the livestock on a farm. But there was much more than that, it was an ambush, Vampires, Werewolves, Ghosts, Demons all came after the hunters. Her parents told Reyla to run, and she did, her parents fate was never known, and the contractor that hired them on for the job had already skipped town.

Reyla is hunting the contractor, this could have been Melissa or Damian or some other scheming person in the SB.
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Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:24 pm
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I don't think it needs to be decided now about who's responsible for that.
For Reyla, it's unknown anyway - and the one who did it probably wouldn't be thinking about it all the time, so in the beginning of the SB it's not really necessary for it to be known.

Stella, I was planning on starting sometime in the evening, as Alexander is a human who shows his good side, and then (in the same chapter) the night would fall and he'd turn, and Cristina would think about all that and her past and random stuff along the way. Does that time work for everyone? Evening/night?
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Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:42 pm
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Sorry LH, I forgot about that! Just trying to help :) As Aria says, it's not the most important thing right now- it doesn't seem like the kind of thing Melissa would do though, and I don't know why Damian would hire werewolves etc. to his side.

Aria- I started at one o'clock in the morning. Also I'd like to make this October-ish time- so it makes sense for Louise and Liam to be in college, also the nights are a little bit longer so the vamps have more flexibility :)
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Sun Feb 03, 2013 10:57 pm
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Mhmmm, fine with me :)

Oh, yes, I decided to make Alexander not going to school.. Will be explained in the chapter, as I now really don't have time ^^
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 12:13 am
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I've rejoined the SB and reposted as a new character
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:51 am
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Hey, anyone want to be the rogue vampire that turned Emilie?
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 2:02 am
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I'll take it if no-one else does
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 2:07 am
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I thought good grammar was essential :p
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 2:15 am
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Forgive me, having two hour sleep plus being sick does something to you.
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Tue Feb 05, 2013 1:37 am
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Thanks Loth!
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I'll reply tonight when I'm back from clinic. Alvarin, Pen, Veeren and Lauren, I'm going to have Sarah take Louise from the scene and run, leaving Emilie and Dante to sort rhings out. Louis if it's okay with you, I'm going to roll with the scene of Melissa and Seth in the bank when she gets a call from Damian saying he's arrived in town. How does that sound to everyone?
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Tue Feb 05, 2013 8:37 am
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^ Exelent :)
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Tue Feb 05, 2013 1:48 pm
Caesar says...



Sounds great, Stells. Seth might accompany her. Because he's worried for her has some business to conclude with Damian.

Pencil2paper wrote: (...) earblasting dubs ten (...)


I think you mean dubstep ;P
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Tue Feb 05, 2013 2:31 pm
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I'm sorry its taking me so long to post- I work late tonight but Ill have one written up on my breaks.
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