Young Writers Society

Alvarin wrote:I'm here to complain again, feels like it's all I ever do here.. Sorry xD

Dawnpath 1, did you read megsug's whole post? It's a bit weird that your character suddenly comes in and starts talking to Korhel while Balik is also supposed to be talking to him.

I thought I explained that she followed the sounds of yelling?

Yes, but your character starts talking before Balik is done, that's what I'm getting at.

*Sigh* I will edit. But I will also say that that was not the post I read...

Ooh! Ooh! Anaki wants to kill Glitch!

that's two!

Make that three . I shall slay the beast!! Sorry i haven't been posting. Technical difficulties.

and that's enough for an arguement. Argue on!

Hello there. Just so you guys know, it's me janika. I just made another account. On occasion i'll be posting under this avatar instead of my regular one, though probably not that often. And I shall slay the beast!!

It would depend on my orders, weather or not I slay the beast.

Glitch would like to remind you that he is not, in fact, a beast, but an inteligent goblinoid warmage, who plans on taking genor after you leave it, and turnit into a fortress.

My apologies, sir. I didn't mean to offend. I shall slay the goblinoid!!! Is that better?

methrirr123 wrote:Glitch would like to remind you that he is not, in fact, a beast, but an inteligent goblinoid warmage, who plans on taking genor after you leave it, and turnit into a fortress.

I love being ignored and being taken out of character, especially after an edit.

There are a few things wrong with the post including Aelicine:

One: She'd be confident Korhel would win, so she would do nothing
Two: She'd know Atrian culture, having been to Atra, and having also had spies in Atra
Three: Both Rovalaan and Aelicine were there for the issued challenge
Four: She would never order him into a situation that would mean anything like this one, which is basically condemned to hang for interference from the law.
Five: They ALL know who he is, since she announced them
Six: I was not spoken too about this. Which is unusual.
Seven: It's not in Aelicine's character to present her zeal in such a manner. If it were life or death, maybe, but it was a sparring match, without weapons. Since Korhel would abhor fighting without a sword, she would have reason to question, and there for wait and anylize, assuming she wasn't there.
I do not wish to continue to carp at you. I have outlined what I do not like about your post.

ond:I was under the impression that her sense of logic overuled her sense of nationalism, and that a fight between the two spelled war and that she knew it.
two: I didn't think I portrayed here as not knowing about atraian culture.
three: oops. I'll get on that.
four: bad idea on my part. I'll make it so that she tried to stop him.
five: if you read the previous post, Anaki didn't hear her. But yes, you did announce the two.
six:I'm an impatient person about this kind of thing, and I realize that I frustrate you about this kind of thing. I just notice large blocks of text posted by maybe Shadow or Alvarin at times (not picking on you guys) that include ALOT of dialogue from everyon. But again, I'm fully and totally in the wrong here.
seven: I'm stupid. I'll edit my post. I'm just impatient. seven things... that makes me feel stupid. My bad.

I ended up just scrapping the entire post, deciding that if I waited, I would have more of a basis as to what I should post. I feel like I'm really bad at this whole SB thing... I'm really sorry you guys.

Janika, I deleted my post after you read it , and then you posted yours. I re wrote my post and it came after yours. It should agree with most of the points listed above. DO NOT DELETE YOUR POST BECAUSE YOU READ THE POST ABOVE THIS. thank you.

Take a chill pill, weirdo. And you're not stupid, so stop saying so. Yes, you messed up, and oh well. Don't let Dawn make you feel like crap.