we are not carriers. and other than that, there isn't a problem with the storybook as long as everyone knows where they are in the SB.
~The future is only history yet to come~ personal quote ~Writing isn't a job or work. Its a passion and a gift.~ Personal quote ~Love is something everyone deserves, few know, and only the elite understand~ personal quote
I think everything is transpiring much too quickly. Things are solved so easily that there isn't any tension in the story. I think that's what the problem is at the moment.
Laments of passion Obstructed by fear. Under guises of jovial chatter; Incredulous hopes Steadily feasting away- Eating away at my heart.
Right. To try and give this story a plotline, I've thrown in a few objectives for the survivors to try and follow, should everyone agree. I think it'd be a good idea to enforce everyone to address all issues here to be discussed.
Laments of passion Obstructed by fear. Under guises of jovial chatter; Incredulous hopes Steadily feasting away- Eating away at my heart.
okay that sounds great. So do you mind explaining the relationships with each of the characters at the moment, whats happening in the SB right at this moment, and any other little details that i'm obviously missing.
all I know is that my guy is alone, but is noticing the attractive males.
~The future is only history yet to come~ personal quote ~Writing isn't a job or work. Its a passion and a gift.~ Personal quote ~Love is something everyone deserves, few know, and only the elite understand~ personal quote
I don't know about the relationships in the SB, I think right now romantic relationships are non-existent. If you want to get your character into one, you should probably ask one of the other participants. I think my character is going for a narrative position with his journal entries.
As for the storyline, we should post about a meeting being called between the team the following morning.
Laments of passion Obstructed by fear. Under guises of jovial chatter; Incredulous hopes Steadily feasting away- Eating away at my heart.
Oh no I hadn't meant only romantically. I mean like who were friends before the outbreak and if there are any particular enemies or anything. I mean it seems like everyone is already starting to pair up which is fine and if I get to lonely i'll just make friends i guess. But I kind of also wanted to ask about the school itself. Like are their separate smaller buildings branching off from the large one that we're in now? Or is it just one big school?
its one big school. Using the department-structure is just there to give the navigation an easier feel. Also, I may make a second character eventually that finds his way into the school from a couple towns away. My character currently has no enemies nor friends and is closed off due to having to kill his parents and dead BF. Leave your opinions of me adding a second character into the SB below or PM me.
~The future is only history yet to come~ personal quote ~Writing isn't a job or work. Its a passion and a gift.~ Personal quote ~Love is something everyone deserves, few know, and only the elite understand~ personal quote
I'm kinda stuck with my character. She doesn't really have any friends or relationships... should I just have her killed off or does somone have a better idea? Just wondering...
Right okay, everything needs to be changed... again. Chupa and Desticakes need to sort out this confrontation between their characters before I think about commencing the meeting of all the characters the next day. If that situation can be solved as soon as possible, that'd be nice.
Does everybody think that my idea is a good direction, or should we go with a different plan?
Laments of passion Obstructed by fear. Under guises of jovial chatter; Incredulous hopes Steadily feasting away- Eating away at my heart.
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