Young Writers Society

Yeah, but it's still gone, isn't it? -.-' Well, I'm working on it now. I'm gonna need the descriptions of how Lordshire and Yamani are as leaders and what they expect from their soldiers.. Again. And I'm gonna write the summary too.

Did you guys decide whether you wanted to make some final posts? I'd at least like to know if Jubiah and Luna survived their fight xD If they're going to fight, that is.

D'aw. Oh well, I'll get right on that.

Thank you ^^ Oh, I figured I could start the whole thing by using Lordshire's words (about how the queens died and so on), so do you think you could write that as well? You don't need to post it or anything, I just want the lines

I've put a deadline on myself: Two weeks. So in two weeks the new SB should be up. Make sure to post whatever you need until then.

I'll probably put that in my last post (which I'll try to put up tonight).

And two weeks seems like it's right around the corner xP
I don't think I'm ready. Dx

.. 2,5 weeks? xD I need a deadline or I'll never be done. That's how I work.

One little question: What title do you prefer?
A: Wonderland Rift 2
B: Through the Looking-Glass
C: Wonderland Rift 2 (Through the Looking-Glass)

And one little request: It would be really nice if you all could adapt your profiles according to this No, you don't have to do it now, but I thought you might want to begin.

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[b]Name:[/b]
[b]Based on what character?:[/b] (If he/she isn't based on one of the characters then leave blank.)
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Alliance:[/b] (Whites, Hearts or Thrones.)
[b]Rank:[/b] (Soldier, Guard, General, ect. Keep it reasonable. Not everyone can be a high up General.)

[b]Appearance:[/b] (Pictures are very appreciated but words are mandatory.)
[b]History:[/b] (Be descriptive. At least three paragraphs.)
[b]Personality:[/b] (Once again, be descriptive. Include strengths and weaknesses.)

[b]Weapon(s):[/b]
[b]Ability:[/b] (Nothing major. It's just to add some excitement.)
[b]Up for Love?:[/b] (Yes/no, orientation.)
[b]Other:[/b] (Anything forgotten?)

I really want 'Wonderland Rift 2' to be in the title, so either A or C works for me
But if you want to give it a title then I guess C would be the best choice.

Well... this is awkward.
I guess I did have a copy of it saved, except it was a bit older version >.<

*Bangs head against the wall, again*
Oh, well.. I guess I'll just work that in with what I've already written (which is most of it) xD At least you don't have to rewrite the things about the thrones and the hearts now That means that only the summary remains. I started by making a list of the most important events.

I was going to list some of the important places in Wonderland Capital (no idea what else to call the city) as well. So far I have the castle (where the thrones are), the tavern (which is now very popular among th thrones, especially the former rebels) and the former HQ of the rebels (now abandoned and falling apart). We kind of need a base for the whites and the hearts so I thought I might write up some description for the white base and if it's okay with Shadow I can come up with something for the hearts as well.. And then I'm going to attempt to make a map. Yeah, you heard me, I'm making a map. Very basic though. Does that sound good enough? Oh, and is there something more I should add?

Hm, I'd guess the hearts would be mainly in the forest, since that's where Yamani retreated to. And maybe Lordshire knows she still might be out there, so he doesn't permit people to travel into the forest.
And it really surprises me how we managed to live in this world with just a tavern, a broken down base, and a castle. xP Maybe we can make a few more eye catching locations, like a giant monument of lordshire in the middle of the town.

And I love making maps Maybe I can tweak it when your done with it?

Phahaha, you can do the map if you want. I've never done one before. I'll make some type of sketch on paint and then let you have at it. Is it bad that I like the idea about the monument? xD

Sound good to me
And of course not, who doesn't want to admire lordshire yes. That is very bad.

I just wanted to let you guys know that I'm still here lol. Although I haven't really been active that much.
But I will definitely be in the new SB. ^_^

Don't worry, I've reserved a spot for you, so Jasper is still in I'm going to PM you with the new profile template

Okay, so I'm editing my Jabberwocky profile and he was originally forced to serve under the queen of hearts. But now that Lordshire is in control I'm not sure what to put him as. What do you guys think?