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Fri Aug 31, 2012 7:53 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Oh, and as for Italian, I still need to consider your characters, but they won't show up in chapter 1 anyway, so I'll give you the heads up in a few days.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Fri Aug 31, 2012 11:17 pm
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Ah, of course. I'll be waiting then :)
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Sat Sep 01, 2012 11:39 am
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So when do we start?
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Sat Sep 01, 2012 12:00 pm
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Now :D

Yes, the SB is now up and running. Now I would like to request that everybody stay tuned in the DT so we can talk about what's going on. Once again, any questions should be directed here.

Each member has been put into a group at the moment, so it'd be good to talk to your partners' creators to understand their behavior and how they act; we don't want any arguments about characters being portrayed incorrectly.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sat Sep 01, 2012 12:17 pm
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Do I still get to post here? I will be posting later on right, as like the main villain?
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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Sat Sep 01, 2012 12:22 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Your villain will not come in until chapter three. As I said, the first villain is merely a test for the Saints, and chapter two holds something much darker. However, your character has something to do with all that precedes him until chapter 4. Just trust me, I have this planned out. Just stay tuned.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sat Sep 01, 2012 9:49 pm
Crow29 says...



Checking in. I hope you are aware that when I get my villains going, the saints are going to be in a world of pain...
At the end of the day, when the sun is gone and the light is lost, the shadows will play.

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Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:16 am
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Here is the profile for the villain in chapter 1. Thanks for all the current posts, however, Lana, I'd suggest keeping the safety on when your pistol is in its holster, just so you don't shoot yourself in the leg accidentally when producing the firearm.

Anyway:

Spoiler! :
Alias: Reflection

Real name: Joanne Roberts

Gender: Female

Age: 26

Appearance: Pale skin with a clear complexion. She has short, straight ginger hair and steel grey eyes. She is around five feet seven inches, with a slim and lanky build. She has no signature clothes as she rarely retains her own image due to the criminal capacities that her powers allow her.

Abilities: Can mimic the appearance of any humanoid, however, she maintains her physical mass. Carries a nine millimetre pistol for extra security.

Character: Vindictive, spiteful and headstrong, Joanne acts spoilt and selfish, which matches her self-centred, egotistic attitude. She has a fast wit that comes with her powers, and also a constant feeling of paranoia and observation. She is reckless and often ignorant to danger due to her possession of powers.

Other: N/A

Theme tune: Can’t think of one.


More will be available later. Now I know what is going on for this bit: A ginger hair will be found at both thefts and the murder, the rape case turns out to be a dead lead that involves no supernatural activity, just incompetence on the cop's side. Following observation of security tapes, we will find that maybe one or two gingers came in the store, but they'll have solid alibi's, meaning we'll have to be thinking of certain supernatural involvement.

Anything anyone would like to add?
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:31 am
KingLucifer says...



Meh, I've spotted a spelling error in the profile for the test criminal. And it also be nice if you were to add the origin in which they obtained there powers from.
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:57 am
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You must have misread it; there are no spelling errors. As well as this, just where they gained their powers is irrelevant, they're not a central character, and furthermore not very important. But if your interested, she was simply born with these abilities, just like many of the Saints were. Let's remember that this villainess is not supposed to be formidable, she is merely a pawn in a larger game anyway.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sun Sep 02, 2012 10:01 am
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Meh yea I did misread, but I thought it'd be interesting detail about the characters to add. It could even come up in the SB later.
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 1:30 pm
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Sorry if I'm a bit late, but I'm here now!
Take your time- hurry up,
choice is yours don't be late
Take a rest, as a friend,
as an old memory.

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Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:55 pm
LanaBrown says...



You must have misread DNX, I did write that the put the saftey on the gun. I misspelled on though. I'll fix that now.
We're all in the same game, just on different levels; Dealing with the same hell, only different devils.
  





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Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:59 pm
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S'all good. It said 'of', so I assumed you meant 'off'. XD
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Mon Sep 03, 2012 7:30 pm
KatKage says...



Sorry I've been gone for a bit guys, had to finish a stupid school work XP

But! I'm here now ^^ I'll post my starting post up in a while ^^ Except. . .

I'm not sure what's going on ^^'' Can someone fill me in? ^^
I am a Leaf on the Wind,
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Kyrie Eleison down the road that I must travel,
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