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Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:22 am
DarknecrosisX says...



^ At the moment we're all in designated groups to investigate a series of crimes (check the actual SB for the groups), and we are currently investigating each crime. The two thefts and the murder will eventually become linked, the rape case can be dismissed as containing no supernatural involvement, and furthermore not a case that should be investigated by the Saints.

The profile posted further up is the villain for this chapter, but we will discover her later on in the story. For now we are just getting the characters acquainted with each other. Before we continue the plot I want to see each hero post once, and then we can get the plot moving.

Again, suggestions for how to make the plot a bit more interesting are welcome here!
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Incredulous hopes
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Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:24 am
Caesar says...



I'm still suggesting a chance meeting with one of my villains.
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Tue Sep 04, 2012 10:27 am
DarknecrosisX says...



Sounds like a good idea, but leave that for a little bit first.
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Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Tue Sep 04, 2012 11:21 am
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Of course.
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Tue Sep 04, 2012 4:55 pm
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Do you want us to catch the rapist or do we drop the case as soon as its decided there is nothing supernatural about it?
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Tue Sep 04, 2012 5:20 pm
KatKage says...



I was thinking that Zac could have a whim to still pursue the guy who did it or something like that (he could do it later alone or with the others) ^^
It's just a sugestion, we don't need to go through with it ^^
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Wed Sep 05, 2012 3:05 pm
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I could always get two of the Saints to follow up the lead I guess, but that will need to be finished before the full fledged investigation begins. if somebody would like to volunteer their character to investigate the case a little further with Zac, then that will be all good. At the moment I'm waiting on Venom, Z03, Katkage and Tyrant to comment before we continue the plot any further.
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Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Wed Sep 12, 2012 3:40 pm
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Are we going to wait for those who haven't posted to do so or are we just going to continue and let them catch up in their own time?
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Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:39 pm
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Yeah, I'm probably gonna post now, I've waited a fortnight for Kat to comment, and I don't want this SB dying :?
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Fri Sep 14, 2012 8:06 pm
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Sorry, but I'm not sure what's going on! ^^'' I'll post but can someone first tell me where we're goin with this? ^^'' are we persuing this, ar we droping it; what? ^^''
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Fri Sep 14, 2012 10:21 pm
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Ok, you could always interview a suspicious witness that the police have found and asked to question. He, being the rapist, could try to flee when the inquiry gets more dangerous, leading to Zac pursuing him. Basically, you three don't really find much, as the crime you're investigating isn't related to the other three.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Fri Sep 14, 2012 10:27 pm
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Ok ^^ I'll post up sometime later tonight ^u^
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Sun Sep 23, 2012 1:44 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Hey guys, sorry for the time it took for me to post, I've been... busy. Regardless, I've posted now, and I'm expecting Nova to receive a full update on how each team is progressing in terms of investigation. If you're not quite sure how to progress your line in the story, PM me or ask in this thread. Only one person will need to report to Celeste, but I will be expecting in the next few series of posts that the team will meet in the conference hall. to discuss all findings and suggest a course of action.

That is all :D

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Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Mon Sep 24, 2012 12:53 pm
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I'm just going to wait for someone else to post so I don't put anyone on the spot, and then I will post :)
I will review for you! PM about it if you need one!


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Mon Sep 24, 2012 1:06 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Sounds good.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  








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