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I know what you did last summer dt



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Mon May 28, 2012 2:17 am
Ipod says...



here is the dt I promised
Last edited by Ipod on Thu May 31, 2012 12:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
Let the past live behind you not with you ,let the present live with you not behind you.
  





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Tue May 29, 2012 3:00 pm
Crow29 says...



Uh, I might join, but before I do I want to point out that the note is from I know what you did last summer, not Scream. The clue being in the name, I guess.
At the end of the day, when the sun is gone and the light is lost, the shadows will play.

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Wed May 30, 2012 3:05 am
Ipod says...



i know but this isnt really the version of scream its my own version
Let the past live behind you not with you ,let the present live with you not behind you.
  





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Wed May 30, 2012 8:37 pm
Crow29 says...



My point more being that you might as well have called it 'I know what you did last summer', being as it is almost identical to that, and bearing no semblance to scream whatsoever.
I do apologise for being quite so critical, but it's a fair point I think.
At the end of the day, when the sun is gone and the light is lost, the shadows will play.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fV9IJVoFR_Q
  








To be a master of metaphor is the greatest thing by far. It is the one thing that cannot be learnt from others, and it is also a sign of genius.
— Aristotle, Poetics