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Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:28 pm
Crow29 says...



OK guys, just poll your vote below as to whether you want to write 1st or 3rd person. If it ties, then I will be confused, and I will have the deciding vote. Anyone who doesn't post here or PM me, I will assume has dropped out of the SB.
Any other questions, plot ideas etc, just add here too.
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:39 pm
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DarknecrosisX says...



Voting for third; it's close to impossible to get into perspective of a man with no sentiment.

P.s, You do realise you can't trust Alec to reply to this, right?
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:46 pm
TyrantOfWar says...



1st person
I want to see you choke on your lies,
Swallow up your greed,
Suffer all alone in your misery.


My Life Story:
Lies Greed Misery
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Dq9q6afIP8
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:47 pm
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TyrantOfWar says...



Secondly I laugh at you know Richard.
I want to see you choke on your lies,
Swallow up your greed,
Suffer all alone in your misery.


My Life Story:
Lies Greed Misery
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Dq9q6afIP8
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:50 pm
Crow29 says...



people always reply when you bully them over facebook
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 6:53 pm
TyrantOfWar says...



Thirdly you didn't bully me Sam! It would've involved a lot more blood and screaming (mostly you when I would've reached for the Gladius hidden in my hidden armoury hidden under my bed). Also you need to comment on Flesh VS Steel Richard!
I want to see you choke on your lies,
Swallow up your greed,
Suffer all alone in your misery.


My Life Story:
Lies Greed Misery
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Dq9q6afIP8
  





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Fri Apr 06, 2012 10:09 pm
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Threnody says...



Hi, I'm kind going to vote neutral, it's not a problem for me to do either.
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Sat Apr 07, 2012 3:54 pm
Crow29 says...



Thanks Threndoy.
Tyrant, shut your hole.
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Sat Apr 07, 2012 7:49 pm
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DarknecrosisX says...



I kinda stole your Gladius and sold it to a scrap dealer. Times are getting hard Alec, and I needed the money. I'm sure you understand.
Last edited by DarknecrosisX on Wed May 02, 2012 8:54 am, edited 1 time in total.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Tue Apr 10, 2012 4:15 pm
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Crow29 says...



OK, by the fact that we have in fact had a vote for each and one abstain, I'm just going to cast the deciding vote. 3rd person it is. Sorry Tyrant.
At the end of the day, when the sun is gone and the light is lost, the shadows will play.

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Tue Apr 10, 2012 8:08 pm
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Betheny says...



Hi, sorry I'm late to the vote. :) I'm happy either way.
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Sun Apr 15, 2012 6:24 pm
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Crow29 says...



Ok guys, votes counted. One for each. You're not helpful at all. I'm casting the deciding vote- 3rd person. Sorry to TyrantofWar, the one and only person to vote 1st.
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Tue Apr 17, 2012 7:51 pm
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TyrantOfWar says...



Great...and I was enjoying writing in 1st person because my character is quite cocky and you cannot really get convey that with 3rd person.
I want to see you choke on your lies,
Swallow up your greed,
Suffer all alone in your misery.


My Life Story:
Lies Greed Misery
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Dq9q6afIP8
  





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Mon Apr 30, 2012 3:22 pm
Crow29 says...



Yes you can.

Also guys, I just addressed someone but have left it completely open, so if you want to get back in now's a good chance. I'm going to PM the same message to everyone as well.
At the end of the day, when the sun is gone and the light is lost, the shadows will play.

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Wed May 02, 2012 8:55 am
DarknecrosisX says...



So we're all meeting in thias alley ma-jig, then-what?
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  








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