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Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:16 pm
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Threnody says...



Here you can ask questions, discuss plot twists and do anything else that's related to the Sleepers Awake storybook.

Here is a quick link back to the storybook.
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Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:20 pm
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--> UpandOut: It would be interesting to have her either following the group without their knowledge, not recognise Sam and him not recognise her due to their changes but have her a part of the group, or something like that. I want to keep her close to the group in some way.
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Mon Mar 26, 2012 11:20 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Okay. That's what I was thinking.
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I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
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Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:19 am
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Cailey says...



I have a question. :) You said anything cut by the sleepers can be "converted", does this count for the kids as well? As in, can someone from the Group fall to the Tremors if he or she is injured by the Sleepers?
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Wed Mar 28, 2012 12:34 am
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Yep. Anyone can contract the Tremors and become a Sleeper, even animals which I mentioned in the description. That's what makes it so dangerous.
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Sun Apr 01, 2012 11:30 pm
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xXmusicaXx says...



Posting for updates. :D
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Mon Apr 02, 2012 11:45 am
MiaParamore says...



Alright, so this is what I made up on my own. I hope that's not a problem.

So, few days back what had happened was that Jeremy had been left in charge of Claire while others had gone to get food and wood. But Jeremy had been immersed in his own thoughts that when a Sleeper had tried to come near Claire, he hadn't seen,

Poor Claire had been so terrified when she saw the Sleeper and she almost tripped in the water. But Sam came in good time and saved her, after of course killing the Sleeper.

I hope that's okay.
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Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:30 pm
Threnody says...



That's fine, I like it!
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Mon Apr 02, 2012 12:41 pm
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PixieStix says...



So guys, are there gonna be any couples? Or no? :) I'm here! :P
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Mon Apr 02, 2012 1:37 pm
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Threnody says...



I was planning to leave that up to spontaneity but if you want to pre-plan something with someone than feel free!
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Mon Apr 02, 2012 3:23 pm
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They're already forming naturally, don't you think?
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Mon Apr 02, 2012 7:41 pm
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



Ali's up for a couple, just definitely not with Sam...
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Mon Apr 02, 2012 8:55 pm
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PixieStix says...



LOL. That would be weird...
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:33 pm
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Threnody says...



Hello! I'd just like to warn you that I'm touring with my Symphony Winds group for all of next week and I have little access to technology and the time with which to utilise it. I may not have a chance to post but it would be great if you could direct yourselves as I know you're all quite capable of doing.

Thanks,
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Fri Apr 06, 2012 5:51 pm
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xXmusicaXx says...



We'll try, Thren! And hopefully, we won't trash your SB when we do it. XD
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