Young Writers Society

What if they both are allies, and they turn on Reed? Then something happens, and they all three fight against each other. Then they all fall to the ground at the same moment, two cannons sounding, and the audience doesn't know who died. SUSPENSE!

Everyone, I just want to say that one of the rules was to not use first-person. Next time, please change it to third. This is exactly what I was trying to prevent. If you have done this, it's okay! But please switch it at the next post.
---Shooting Stars

:/ dangit, i'm gonna have to figure out a way to kill Ryder...

What? No first person? I live off of first person! Hm, well I shall try to restrain myself, but I might accidentally change to first person in the middle of my post. Unintentionally, of course, but I'm just warning you because I've been known to do this before.

So wait... am I one of the last to die or the first since I don't have a number?

Jaden, just give me a number 1-100 and I'll put in your order.

ShootingStars wrote:Everyone, I just want to say that one of the rules was to not use first-person. Next time, please change it to third. This is exactly what I was trying to prevent. If you have done this, it's okay! But please switch it at the next post.

I just would like to know why we have to write in first instead of third person? It doesn't seem like there would be a specific, solid reason...

Dragonette wrote:Justagirl~ Oh my gosh I can't believe our luck! Nya and Bronze have to fight eachother to the death! So excited for that scene!!

I KNOWW!!!
It's gonna be awesomeeee.

Also, Stars, I believe you! It's actually really lucky that you get to win the Games! It'll be cool that our characters will have to fight to the death (that is, if Jaden's character doesn't become the last to die)!!!

If you can figure out a way when you die to say it while in first person, I guess that's okay. The reason I put that in there was because when you're knocked out of the Games, what will you write? "...The sword came crashing down toward my head, and suddenly the world turned black. I died." ???
I guess if you find out a way, you can do it. I don't want to take out the fun of first person, however. Make it work!
---Shooting Stars

ShootingStars wrote:If you can figure out a way when you die to say it while in first person, I guess that's okay. The reason I put that in there was because when you're knocked out of the Games, what will you write? "...The sword came crashing down toward my head, and suddenly the world turned black. I died." ???
I guess if you find out a way, you can do it. I don't want to take out the fun of first person, however. Make it work!
---Shooting Stars

Really? You'll let me write in first person? YAYY!! You're the best

P.S. If you'd like to see a sample of a character of mine dying when I was writing in first person, look here. If this isn't good for you... I guess I can write in third... *Whimper*

Awwwwwwwwwwww my tribute dies. I am like so sad.

Jordan: Haha By the way, where were you this morning??? I was looking for you at the band room. I wanted to get on YWS in the Media Center with you...

Justagirl: The way you wrote the death in the Toy Box was perfect. So if you can do something like that, you're golden!

Everyone: I'll be posting Part 2 soon. It should be done tonight before my bedtime. Yay! Training Center, here we come!
---Shooting Stars

Posted Part 2: Training Center Arrival/ Dinner!
---Shooting Stars

What should the dinner be like is it like all of use or on are floors

It's just our District at supper, but if everyone else wants it to be all of us, we can do that. Either way, it'd be fun. I'd personally like us all together.
---Shooting Stars

Yes, please please please can I stay in first person!? *puppy eyes* You wouldn't take that from me would you? Would you?!

Yeah, I don't want to make anyone sad, so if you finish it like Justagirl did, that's fine.