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Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:49 pm
LadySpark says...



XD. the one about Logan Lerman?
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Sat Dec 10, 2011 4:52 pm
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Yes, it was super awesome and I high-five your brain for it :D *High-fives Spark's brain*
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Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:22 pm
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SmylinG says...



I realized I still don't have a power. Could I be a pyro?
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Sat Dec 10, 2011 5:23 pm
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That would be sweet!
  





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Sat Dec 10, 2011 6:42 pm
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Sins says...



Go for it! :D Great start so far, guys. I'll hopefully be able to post pretty soon. Probably tomorrow morning or late this evening because I'm going out in half an hour. :3
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Sun Dec 11, 2011 1:27 pm
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Sins says...



AlexInCircusLand and Redfang, can you cool it down on the posting please? There are 12 posts of the SB so far and 7 of them are you two so you're taking up the majority of the storybook, plus I've had to read over a lot of posts this morning because you guys posted so fast.

Before you start panicking, I'm not angry or anything. I just want to make sure you know in the future to not post so frequently, otherwise the SB will just end up being you two. x3 You could always do something like make your posts longer so that there's a lot in one post, rather than a lot spread out into five posts or something. That way you can say everything you want to say without taking up a lot of the SB.

Thanks, guys!
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Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:53 pm
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It's not our fault that happened. We just got carried away, that's all.
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Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:11 pm
FruityBickel says...



I do tend to make short posts. I'll try not to post so frequently, and when I do I'll try to make it more than one or two paragraphs long.
  





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Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:13 pm
Sins says...



Redfang18 wrote:It's not our fault that happened. We just got carried away, that's all.


Don't worry, I'm not blaming anyone for anything. Get carried away by all means--in fact, embrace it--but try and do so with one long post instead of a few if you can.

And okay, thanks a bunch, Alex!
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Sun Dec 11, 2011 7:20 pm
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I'll see if I can make longer posts. They happen to pop up in front of me when I do stuff- like listen to music to help me think or fiddle around on my violin. Both do help me at some degree, but long posts don't come on demand. Those come around by chance.
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Sun Dec 11, 2011 8:15 pm
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If you do struggle with making long posts, don't worry. Don't feel pressured to make long posts if you struggle with that because the last thing I want you to feel is pressure of any kind. If that's the case, just be careful to post as evenly as everyone else, whether your post is a paragraph long or 50 paragraphs long. :) So long as you don't spend an entire post dedicated to a description of a toilet or something, the length isn't too important.
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:40 am
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Shearwater says...



Quick question, when do humans get their powers? I'm kind of confused with that. Are they gifted with them after they meet their Angels or is there some special ceremony or something?
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:51 am
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Redfang18 says...



I second that question. I'm curious as a cat on that part.
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:40 pm
Sins says...



I've been thinking about that actually. I'm not sure whether they should just have their powers now after meeting their guardian angels or have it so they get their powers some other way, like, have them all join hands and sing Ring Around the Rosie or something...

Any suggestions/opinions on that?
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:47 pm
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Justagirl says...



Skins wrote:Any suggestions/opinions on that?


Well, it could be awarded over time.

Like, when the head angel feels the time is right for the human to get their power. Say, if on the way to Bejing, they run into a few demons and need their power the head angel will give it to them.

I don't know if you want to do it that way.....
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