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Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:57 pm
Calligraphy says...



Maybe the angels could use giving the powers to the people as a way to prove that they are who they say they are?
  





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Mon Dec 12, 2011 5:57 pm
Shearwater says...



I like Calli's idea. That could be a possibility. Or we can also have it that our humans experienced little glimpses of their power throughout their life and the angels help them after they meet to fully unleash whatever their power is - this could also help the angels prove who they are?
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:02 pm
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Yeah, that sounds like a really cool idea!

Is everyone okay with it being so that the humans have had glimpses of their powers all their life and to prove that they're real, the angels give them their full powers?
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:04 pm
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Even though this has nothing to do with Morrisa, I'm going to say yes :)
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 6:08 pm
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I'm in for that. Alex kinda feels like he's wasting his time challenging Noah. I'm thinking that in my next post, Alex would be thinking, "The more time I waste getting this boy to know I really am an angel, the closer the Queen of Hell gets to bringing hell on earth." I'm trying to make Alex get this show on the road, but he's making me go insane in my nogin. He's more alive in my head than I thought.
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 7:29 pm
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Skins wrote:Is everyone okay with it being so that the humans have had glimpses of their powers all their life and to prove that they're real, the angels give them their full powers?


Fine with me (:
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 11:48 pm
Redfang18 says...



Yeah, he is difficult. But that's not stoppin' me from makin' Alex get Noah to crack. That's what makes it fun.
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Tue Dec 13, 2011 1:57 am
FruityBickel says...



Noah can get insulted rather easily, especially when it comes to his family, particularly his father. Just saying.
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2011 2:11 am
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That was the nerve that Alex hit when he first challenged Noah.
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SmylinG says...



Ignorance :wink: :
Spoiler! :
Nice post; though, I wasn't aware my own character went to college. xD I only wrote that he dropped school plans for traveling plans, which explains why he's in London. Also, I thought it was agreed that

Skins wrote:the humans have had glimpses of their powers all their life and to prove that they're real, the angels give them their full powers


I liked your post, just tweak these two details so I feel on the same page with you. David could be at a park or something. And the rest, well, I trust you'll know how to tweak it. When you do, I'll be sure to post back!

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LOL!

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Tue Dec 13, 2011 2:32 am
FruityBickel says...



I edited No's profile and gave him a few more...abnormalities, if you want to check them out Red.
  





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Tue Dec 13, 2011 8:58 pm
Redfang18 says...



I just made what might've been the longest post in my entire career as a Storybooker. I think I might've made Alex the only angel in the whole gang who can't swear. Whadda you guys think about that?
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Tue Dec 13, 2011 9:12 pm
Calligraphy says...



Hey, Eva Lula has already swore, and she is the head of the angels!
  








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