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Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:15 pm
Sins says...



I don't really have any plot bunnies sussed for Zaden yet, partly due to the lack of civilians. He needs buddies, guys, and lots of 'em. Preferably gay. If the civilian spots aren't taken too soon, I might make another civilian character so Zaden can have a good ol' chum to hang around with. I suppose he could hang out with other kinds of people, but I'm not sure if anyone would be up for that because he's quite the handful. xD

If anyone wants their character to interact with him though, just let me know!
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I'll whip one up for you. A girl. Named Santana.

See where this is going? I'm glad.
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Wed Oct 12, 2011 5:17 pm
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Lumi wrote:I'll whip one up for you. A girl. Named Santana.

See where this is going? I'm glad.


YES.
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I make another civilian if you want. (:

I think the surgeons should basically mingle and mix with the civilians and resistance and that kind of thing. That way they could be influenced by certain happenings and have their opinions slowly change. Using that, you could make them torn between their job security and the fact that what they are doing is wrong. Some could even change and take part in the resistance regime.

I think the real random plot events should mainly be organized by the resistance, so we could do a whole; cause, react, and reflect kinda thing. The big plot is whether or not who gets in control of Nova city and the final outcome of the controversy with the symbiosis so like, yah. Personally, I think they should overthrow the Symbiosis and stop hampering with people even if it did make them a thousand times better. ;)

For my character:

Aubrey (that's her name) is a failed surgery so she needs to fit in somewhere. I'm thinking about making a NPC for her mother who takes after her. Her mother and father aren't together, so Maxwell Hyatt really has no idea his daughter exists. He just thinks she is dead, or doesn't even know at all. Symbiosis ruined her life and the main supporter of it is her father.

Now the problem I am having is how she will fit in with the plot and the other characters, because she is schizophrenic and its not like she can help much with the Resistance. Basically she is a victim of the procedures. I'm thinking she needs some kind of partner or character that she knows, like a therapist, who could bring her existence to the attention of others. That way, she can get involved with the plot and not be a hermit (this is for my sanity more than hers).

I could even make that character, but it would be more fun if there was someone else. ;)
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Wed Oct 12, 2011 10:11 pm
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I volunteer to make a character from scratch to be Aubrey's caretaker/loyal friend/whatever. I was about to go try my hand at a civilian character anyway.
  





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Wed Oct 12, 2011 11:11 pm
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Incognito wrote:I think the surgeons should basically mingle and mix with the civilians and resistance and that kind of thing. That way they could be influenced by certain happenings and have their opinions slowly change. Using that, you could make them torn between their job security and the fact that what they are doing is wrong. Some could even change and take part in the resistance regime.


And that is where Ashton comes in with her unique little quirk; her Symbiote is a sentient being and she really doesn't like what's being done to her kind. I think it could work....somehow. I wonder how the humans will react to the knowledge that their Symbiotes are sentient beings?
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Thu Oct 13, 2011 2:25 am
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I was thinking about making another civilian character too.

Or it'd be cool if a civilian was actually very into debates and politics, so he's not afraid of... say, interrupting a speech Maxwell Hyatt was giving? 'Cause he hates Hyatt? That would be fun. Just sayin'.


*cough* How about a female journalist, who's not very good at being objective? I'm not sure if I should make her run, but it could be a possibility, maybe if she's given a lot of encouragement. Mainly though, I could see her support Patricia Peters (women stick together, right?)

I was actually thinking of making her a tv (or whatever alternative we might be using) personality. Not a big news-channel, but one of those rinky-dink 12am shows known for their outspoken biased views and gossiping and all that.

I can see her as friends with some surgeons (maybe they went to same school at one point) and she tries to convince/sway them...? *pokes Leahweird*

There could also be a possibility in her making a deal with the rebels and gets one of them on TV, then you've really stirred up trouble.

Just a plot bunny. Let me know what anyone thinks.

Also, are we starting the plot right when the labs blows up? I'm trying to picture in my head exactly where the resistance would be, cause I'd imagine at that point, they would be hiding seeing as they're going to be targets. In that case, they need some kind of meeting house.
  





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! DT!

I don't think I'll be able to drive two characters in one SB just yet (I've only very recently gotten back into storybooking), but whoever takes the female journalist will have my eternal love and devotion thanks. =D Nicky could do with some trouble in his life, and considering his status in Nova City, I think a journalist would be an interesting addition to his list of affiliates (not necessarily as a friend).

Also, TO RESISTANCE MEMBERS:

I would like to throw up the idea that maybe Nicky has a traitor (resistance member) in his ranks - well, not really a traitor as much as the guy who stole the weapons from Ferapont for the resistance. I mean, the resistance has to get their arms and supplies somewhere, right? The higher up/closer to Nicky, the better. :D

On another note, if Nova City is sort-of-center of the world, maybe biological weapons would be stored there, then maybe we could amp up the tension by using that? I mean, what if the terrorists decide to threaten the civilians with biological weaponry next? (Not that they have it - yet.) And JABBER, I totally forgot to talk to you a while ago in chat. :/ The next time I see you, I'd like to be able to find out the relationship between Max and Nicky? =D

That is all. You can tell I'm super excited for this. *cough*
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Sorry about the lack of OMG LUMI IS PLOTTING going on for the past few days. I've been distracted in a million different ways in a million different places. But this puppy is gonna be good. >:]

Since we have more characters in the SB now with profiles made, start filling in those "Character Interactions" areas, or whatever I called them. Make some chemistry. This'd be good, especially for the resistance knowing other people.

AND ONE MORE THING. Invite more people. Share the fun, share the love, etc. etc. so on and so forth.

I'm going to be making a resistance member myself, I've decided. And we should totally come up with a name for it.
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Sun Oct 16, 2011 11:14 am
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Oooh. A name for the Resistance? *ponders*

HAS = Humans Against Symbiosis?
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Sun Oct 16, 2011 12:18 pm
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And JABBER, I totally forgot to talk to you a while ago in chat. :/ The next time I see you, I'd like to be able to find out the relationship between Max and Nicky? =D


NICKY ILU NICKY

Also, my child isn't posted. :[ *jabs*

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Sun Oct 16, 2011 1:15 pm
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Did we lose a Cheeto again? D:
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Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:25 am
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Skins wrote:I don't really have any plot bunnies sussed for Zaden yet, partly due to the lack of civilians. He needs buddies, guys, and lots of 'em. Preferably gay.



...Carmen is pansexual? 8D
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Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:38 am
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Posting. To get notfications.

Maybe I'll even get my profiles complete and up this week.
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Wed Oct 19, 2011 2:52 am
Audy says...



Not sure about a name for the Resistance. But it'd be cool if resistance members can call people with symbiotes Symbots ^^
  








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