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Thu Nov 03, 2011 10:41 pm
SisterItaly says...



Just, y'know. Waiting for Mr.Gunman to do his thing. (Wake up, resistance people.)
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Thu Nov 03, 2011 11:10 pm
Lumi says...



You can swap to another story if you want. If no one follows the gunman scene, I'll just continue it later myself.
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Thu Nov 03, 2011 11:18 pm
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Then all I need is Jae!
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Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:16 am
Audy says...



Then all I need is Jae!


*Raises hand* I'm here, I'm here. Did you want to start at the apartment? ^^;

Also, I tried y'all, I tried. I also realized my post was kind of clumsy and sloppy (Jude isn't exactly the brightest bulb either). Just let me know if there are any edits to be done and I'll be happy to fix ^_^ I hope things weren't too anachronistic, I've figured since it's only a couple years ahead, there'd still be things like mops and such.

Symbots - *shrugs* slang to call those with symbiotes? o_0 I dunno. I can come up with something else if need be.

Also, I'm not too sure about that lack of curiosity thing either. If anything, that could just be Jude's way of looking at it, not necessarily fact.
  





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Sat Nov 05, 2011 1:27 am
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Shearwater wrote:Again, if anyone wants to play connect the characters, I don't mind sewing in some strings!


So, my fellow politician, I don't really know where Trish is right now! What her job is or anything. I kinda introduced some possibilities in my post if you need to include her anywhere still. Otherwise, I look forward to see what you do with her. 8D

On that note, if I need to change anything, let me know! I was kinda on my own and, like. went NPC-happy just to get some action on my part of the world.
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Sat Nov 05, 2011 3:45 pm
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Sounds great, Jabber! <3

Also, a quick question regarding the political title here as well, are the political hopeful supposed to be campaign-based or could it be another political job title in the Nova district government as well? I had originally thought it was two people campaigning but now I think I might be confused. 8)
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Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:59 pm
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Shearwater wrote:Sounds great, Jabber! <3

Also, a quick question regarding the political title here as well, are the political hopeful supposed to be campaign-based or could it be another political job title in the Nova district government as well? I had originally thought it was two people campaigning but now I think I might be confused. 8)


Aha! Oops! Sorry about that! Maxwell Hyatt is listed as the current governor, then there were two open spots for the political hopefuls, one of which is yours. All three will be campaigning for the upcoming election (In Hyatt's case, re-election), so that's how that plays out. And yes, you can totes do a different political job in Nova. I just didn't know what your plan was! You'll do awesome things whatever you do!
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Sun Nov 06, 2011 2:12 am
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Dang. I haven't been getting these updates on my Notifications. I shall read through right now. >.>

Lykwoah I posted. :O
Hopefully, it wasn't too bad.
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Wed Nov 09, 2011 6:04 pm
joshuapaul says...



Okay, I sort of just dropped a scene in. I'm rather lost, if I am doing it wrong let me know.
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