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Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:33 pm
SisterItaly says...



She wouldn't be in her country, she'd be in Ugya waiting for the ball.
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Wed Sep 07, 2011 11:01 pm
gleek456 says...



Oh! Okay! I got it now! :)
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Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:35 pm
Dreamwalker says...



I still feel as if there is nowhere to throw Fyn in. This might be a little more difficult than I thought >.>
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Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:54 pm
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Sins says...



You could bring him in with mine and Isha's characters. Make it so he heard the smashing sounds, rushed to see what was going on or something, and then go from there maybe. It's an option, I guess. Plus I was supposed to post tonight, but I really need to go soon, so you could be, like, my replacement post for the night. xD
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Fri Sep 09, 2011 8:39 pm
Dreamwalker says...



I'm thinking that might be a good idea! I could also have him interact with Glee's character by accident as well. We shall see ;D.
Suppose for a moment that the heart has two heads, that the heart has been chained and dunked in a glass booth filled with river water. The heart is monologuing about hesitation and fulfillment while behind the red brocade the heart is drowning. - R.S
  








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