Young Writers Society

Here is the discussion thread where we will plan, and comment about the flow of the story.

Note: I will have the final say in what happens, but everyone is allowed to express their opinions and try to sway me towards their ideas.

EDIT: Moved to main post.

Ooo also, I check it.

This is just a test to see if you guys are actually looking at this. Just come in and say you are.

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Not here. *shifty eyes* I'm a figment of your imagination.

Wazzup?

Ahh, I sort of just got rid of my profile... I copied it then forgot it was copied and copied something else... So, I am going to have to remake it, sorry.

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I need someone to create a second character, but I need the character to be a certain way.

Name: *whatever you want it to be*

Age: 16-30

Height: Any height you want it to be.

Gender: Male or female doesn't matter.

Conventional Weapon: Knife, handgun, or anything small and personal.

Supernatural Ability: Kind of like a rage magic. The more anger she feels the more destructive her power. Powers should range in: Calm: Very small kenetic power. Ticked off: Strong kenitic power (able to throw an enemy into a wall). Full rage: Super destructive magic: gravity increases around her, she can throw an enemy a mile a way by thought, that kind of stuff. Try not to use full rage, but when we come to a point in the story that it will fit in, I will tell you. Otherwise stick to throwing enemies into walls and breaking their backs.

Description: How ever you would want them to look.

History: Should include that a sibling or friend was captured and/or killed by the cult in this mountain and they are seeking revenge. Also that they have good control over their anger, so they don't go into full rage every time.


If anyone wants to take a character like this it's first come first serve. So don't complain to me when someone else gets it.

I'll take it unless someone else wants to. I've always loved controlling more than one character.

Recap of what has happened so far. I will do this every so often so people don't fall behind. If anyone wishes to add on to what I say, feel free to.

Events:
1. An APOSF unit of 11 supernatural warriors landed in the desert following a demon attack on the President of the USA
2. They walk through the desert till they come across a small building that Wright sees in her vision.
3. When the team arrives at the building they are attacked by a flying demon. Lethero yells at everyone to get in the building while he battles the demon in Lycan form.
4. Lethero injures demon, but the demon heals and flies away.
5. They go into the building and tear out boards in a stairwell that lead to a cavern where a portal to somehwere* is located.
6. In there, Lethero finds a bone which he hands to Nicarga, the blood mage to examine.
7. Nicarga has a vision of a blood who was ritually sacrificed on an altar to open the portal. Nicarga comes out of it crying.
8. Corry saw the vision with his ability and suspects that Nicarga is not telling the whole truth, especially about the man in the vision.

Those are the major points of what happened in the story. Anyone who wants to feel free to add on. Also, I know I mentioned this in my last post, but some of you people need to step up in the post. The word limit is 150, that's about 1500 character if you go by the little counter on the bottom left of the reply box.

*We'll need to discuss where this portal to somewhere leads. Ideas would be, Hell, a demon realm, a limbo (a place that exists out of time), another universe, etc . . . Give me feedback, and we'll decide on this when we get there.

Oh, Lethero, that post is like God sending me a blessing down from heaven. Thx soooo much

Another key point would be that something with a 'claw on the tip of a golden wing' attacked / is attacking Corry. Though Jenthura didn't specify what it was, so I assume it can be anything.

Lethero - The demon realm sounds like a good idea to me. Hell seems a bit expected with all the blood magic going on right now, but it would fit.

I was assuming another attack from a demon, so I just wrote that in. It can be changed though...

An yes, hell would be very nice, then we'd have to get out somehow, like if the portal closed behind us.