Young Writers Society

A discussion thread for the new storybook "Contracts."

Hurray!

If you haven't seen this movie... I will internet slap you.

I have a question. Should my character bring her "customers" to the underground home thing we have going on, or should she go to their homes? Maybe if we do that, there can be an incident where the "customer" wants her to stay after they "finish" their "encounter" but she refuses and he psychically doesn't allow her to leave so she kills him or Noah comes and saves the day like Superman.


P.S. I don't normally use the apostrophes so much but it's because I'm 13 and not used to writing in the mind of a prostitute so I'm just kind of fuzzled at it

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*gets internet slapped*

Ahaha Jasmine, there's a reason why it's underground -- because it's secret xD I'm all up for Noah being superman though, except he'd probably beaten to the ground along with her if he wasn't careful :3

Noah can take out a knife or something and threaten the dude. Or maybe she'll just poison him *shrugs*

LoveableLittleSock wrote:...
*gets internet slapped*

Ahaha Jasmine, there's a reason why it's underground -- because it's secret xD I'm all up for Noah being superman though, except he'd probably beaten to the ground along with her if he wasn't careful :3

Are you serious? You haven't seen The Patriot?

I don't know if we can be friends anymore!

I've watched half of it

Oh for feth sake! It's even on youtube for FREE. One of the best movies I have ever seen.