Young Writers Society

Selenes going to snap if Tar doesn't pull through. Just FYI for everyone.

Umm. So, I was thinking that we should maybe decide how we're going to end it now? To minimise confusion and such...

So if we could collate ideas of what we want to happen, then everyone will be happy with how it ends. Then a sequel, of course.

My idea (feel free to pick holes in it or completely disagree) is that
- after a while of searching Tae finds Sel, Garrion, Rajun (and the horses)
- she's quite upset/angry that gar has betrayed her
- some kind of face-off
- rajun gets killed
- garrion gets arrested & imprisoned
- sel and aris escape or get caught <- this depends on others' opinions cause I'm not sure which would be better plot-wise
- tae proudly anounces the death of raj to talen
- talen is actually pretty miffed. denies that raj was ever a traitor; disowns tae (???)
- tae has a bit of a fit/epiphany. FINALLY realises that her mother despises her and favours (the now-dead) Rajun. (kills talen ???)
- sets allllllllll the prisoners free
- happy tiems
- maybe tae becomes queen. (or that other character that I don't remember the name of. T- something. but I do secretly think that she should have been dead for years. )
- if this (^) happens, aris and garrion would form part of ze new government cause tae secretly loves 'em


obviously this is just my idea, and it will no doubt be improved by other people's suggestions, cause it's kind of a tae-centric version.

NB: i would be happy for Tae to die at the end, as long as it was part of a good plottish thing, not just for the sake of it.

Well, I love that idea. I think that would be fine. ^_^ It sounds great! The holes will be fixed in while we're SBing it, but I think thats a greeeaaaatttt idea. It makes me sad to think of the ending but that idea makes me almost happy! Lol.

i think there would definately be room for a sequel though! like, how they rebuild the kingdom after an oppressive reign

I'd have to see who'd be willing to join it- then maybe we can sequalize it!

Yaaaaay! Just please don't start it until I get back from trekking (about september) cause I want to be a part of it

Could you help with the italicised parts in my huge previous post? I'm not sure where we should go with those three points...

Now I see why I had to check the DT. I agree Great Idea.

Yaaaaaaaaaay! *happy dance*

But any suggestions/additional ideas? Some bits are seriously wishy-washy haha

OHMYGOSH I JUST HAD A COMPLETE EPIPHANY. Sel and Tar's kid should be in the sequel!!!!!!!!! Obviously all the other charas will be like 30-40 but who cares?! And Tae could have a baby too......... *squeal*



EDIT: I'm going to be away for a few days (until monday) so please don't go crazily fast and please help fill the massive holes/complete indecisions in the plot idea!!

OMG!!! YESS!!!
The kid in the sequel would ROCK!!

I was going to say, "But...whatta bout da baby?"
So yeah, that makes sense to me
And yeah, we can fix holes while SBing

Okay...I just had a random idea.

Why not finish this off with the baby?
7 MONTHS LATER....
blahblahblah

Or we could start the sequal with the baby, and then have something that says like,
5 YEARS LATER...

Just because I was excited to write Tarrion's reaction xD

We could have an epilogue!!!

And then him/her be main chara, with Kale/Aris' kid, and Garrion's kid(s) and Tae's kid and and and *squeal*

Many many children

so do you think Tae should become queen or not? cause that's fairly major and has implications for the sequel.

I personally like the idea of Tae becoming queen

Okay then I like the idea too, but I wanted to check that everyone else was okay with it too (cause of Thaylea or whatever)

Coolio.

So. I have been thinking. And I've finally decided that I don't want Tae to kill Talen, cause I think that no matter how much she wanted to, she wouldn't be able to actually do it...

THEREFORE. Perhaps if, after getting scolded/disowned/whatever, she lets Garrion and Aris go, and kind of just watches as one of the four kills Talen. So she just lets it happen, without actually doing it herself. Does that make sense?
Any volunteers.....?